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well she did argue and have fight previously, not hard break, but the fact james cheated did break their relationship.
Your complementary 5 star review by the author himself, me!. This is just a story that keep clawing in my head, so I decided to put it out. This is quite raw, as honestly I haven't even though how the story will go, but nonetheless if you enjoy it please leave a review here. and maybe give me ideas on how the story should turn out ...
realistically if you are big enough to certain point you still need a label, even the biggest pop star currently taylor swift still signed to a label. in my limited knowledge things like access to recording studios, mixing/mastering, promotion/marketing, distribution, merchandising, tour/concert are some of things that label handle for their artist. maybe you think, just hire someone to do all that, well realistically just in releasing album/music video involved tenth people even hundred in some case. and big artist most likely dont want to do this tedious things and just want to making song and performing them. like copyrighting a song, yes you can copyright it but if you want to handle the infringement it's not that simpleof course. since this system/cheat story of course all can be handled by it if the author wants
would be interested to see him gradually change. this is the first time kazir has power, fame, wealth and it does corrupt people. maybe not 180 degree change but sloe and gradual, like him accepting this "benefit" from the wma contract, and so on. this will create conflict and character arc for kazir himself i think where he can then learn how power also can corrupt him before he then change to be good again to fix his corruption.
sorry😅...
please don't make this story into a superheroes/mutant battle 🥲
not yet 😟
dceu please, there's already too much mcu.
well experience is not equal to capability, person working 10 years as programmer in no named local company most of the time still lose to person working 5 years in google for example. if experience equal capability, there should not be a reason for him not to be success in his past life. i mean in real life hollywood there's a lot of actors/actress with lot of experiences but still has worst acting than people with less, less experiences but more demanding, more passionate roles most of the time have bigger impact than doing a lot of extra works that demands nothing but average.
really hopeful for real character development where lucas show flaws and weakness and his determination and his struggle to overcome it, and not only walk in the park just because he is transmigrator/from the future. especially since it was already stated there's different events/facts in this timeline, like different songs exists, maybe you can expand further like what lucas know will be successful movie/film is flop in this reality, maybe his involvement can cause something changes good or bad that makes him more careful and wanting to become better actor. also one fact that hopefully not just a exposition without meaning, the fact that lucas is no-named/failed actor, while he does have experiences compared to new actors, i'd hope to see real development where lucas realize that his acting skill is still mediocre compared to the vast hollywood, that he is still the same old lucas and he need to better his acting skill and his struggle to achieve it. maybe his previous life he lacks charisma, but this new life his charisma is different, or anything that show us a character arc...
i dont know what's hurting you in real life but, i never even use any hateful, flames, in my comment. i respectfully and honestly just want to give feedback to the author. don't know why you're offended by my comment toward this story. if you enjoy it then please do so, it's yours life to live. if i want to give feedback to the "author", it's my freedom to do so.
maybe because that's the basic of writing? it's fine for character to do anything. as long as it's logical, drastic changes need explanation. for example if you watch/read naruto, what do you think if naruto suddenly kills sasuke without any inkling any foreshadowing that naruto hates sasuke or want to kill him, that'll be weird and out of character. the same thing applies, in this story for example is shin suddenly cheating with another woman, i won't questioned that plot, since we already saw shin appreciates women but he keep himself check for his wife. i don't know why are you argueing really,my point is for the author that in my opinion will help him, whether he takes it or not it's his prerogative, i'm just one of his reader that give him my critic. if it's become too crazy then i will leave this story like many other in webnovel. i like how shin approach his adversary in smart and cunning ways that he already showed in may times in the previous chapter. i like this story because it's grounded in reality, character's likeable and realistic so far, but the few last chapter really weird for me, and this chapter really the point that makes me want to comment.
i said that he never portrayed to hate them specifically, distanced yes, hate? not really. what i questioned is the sudden change. if the author really intended to make shin hate his sibling then do so, i'm fine with it, but show us when, how and why.
i also don't get it. shin never portrayed to hate his siblings, while their sibling show to be jealous of shin's success why he suddenly want to "destroy" their hope? i just think it's more in the character likesuzuki siblings : "wow our discman is booming, do you know why?"suzuki exec : "well , music from kishin is now very popular, that their cds is flying out the shelves, several artists already sell 1 million copies"suzuki siblings : ( 0_0)