so, is this just an IRAS spin-off? considering that all points described in the synopsis are the same except for the main points as well as the 'originality' of the works within the novel, i might just call this IRAS 2.0

he really is stupid

pretends to be shocked

still no knife wielding skill

of course, the author made her that way

cliché, forced

pretends to be shocked

dumb

u r a 3rd rate protag yourself tho stupid

yes my super sense aka the author

cliche af

ah yes, explanation for killing goblins

stupid as alwyas

why would u even hide soemthing insignificant

*pretends to be shocked dumb as always

billionaire for plot's sake, unnecessarily emotional for plot's sake, annoying partner for plot's sake, etc. sense of being natural is lacking. things are there because the author decided it to be that way. needs to have more depth. flow, background, and behavior should be improved. still bearable but pls i hope there are no forced or unnecessary scenarios in the next chapters i know that this was the beginning and that the story have progressed so much but i still have to drop this comment

still no sign of knife proficiency and the gun wielding

this is getting annoying but ill try to bear with this. i.e. useless convos and stupid decisions throughout the early chapters

missed? more like plot armor

but of course, the real stupid one here is the author