Are U doing a timeskip on that 7 years ? And provide flashbacks or whatup ?

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I donT like the Where this going its like you are trying to make him suffer and what with him being found out so eaSly i feel the entire planet will Know who he is Soon

I get the feeling that you want him to cr eate his own universe by the way what is his leVel of PoWer nOw back beforr creating the world you said by the time of plot he will be Equal to great red but On mars time pass differently so where is he Now ?

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Great work but im cunfused about the grades after grandmaster its 1 2 3 then what i saw The letters and i dont know the meaning of it

Keep Going I think this is amazing to read

Keep it going man i love this but i feel Like he is not using his family influence He should get a time turner it Will give him massive amount of time Time that he needs to catch up to the overpowerd older characters

Will i like that you are writing and adding original Ideas and ways so iT doesnt get boring but i hate the main character He is just Crazy Not smart or cold logic but just Crazy He has no purpose For his goals or Even a poper plan he is Just having fun and Winging it

Its like that give it a daY or two max if nothing changes vist a doctor

Most likly becouse this is Becouse even kaido at his peak didnt go beyond Level and you have to factor Is that deveL fruit is what Sets someone apart kaido being immortal doesnt maKe him powerful its hiS body and The dragon Devel fruit plus he lacks something every ones have and thats is experienc Right now he is like a todler with powerful weapon that he doesnt use the right way Otherwise how can you justfy garp being in beyound level he is normal most likl he just has body Like kaido and grand master at haki and experience That the mc lacks he didnt realy fight alot

Just asking is that it for his body ? It wont get stronger by evolving again ? Becouse i think his body should get stronger Like kaido There is a theOry that He has adaptele body so he can become immune To laws like death time etc and thats why he cant die becouse hope the mc can become more overpowered

As much i love this novel i feel that they started to become childish In the Way they act

Great novel but what will you do in time after roger become king to luffy Going to the seas Please dont say he is going to the future With time devil or that he be In prison that would be the worst i think joing Whitebeard and controling things around the world would be nice or just do a time skip showing him every 5 years Or So remeBer there is (imm ) and he lived about 800 years NoW he will Need sometime to catch up

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