I get the feeling that you want him to cr eate his own universe by the way what is his leVel of PoWer nOw back beforr creating the world you said by the time of plot he will be Equal to great red but On mars time pass differently so where is he Now ?
Will i like that you are writing and adding original Ideas and ways so iT doesnt get boring but i hate the main character He is just Crazy Not smart or cold logic but just Crazy He has no purpose For his goals or Even a poper plan he is Just having fun and Winging it
Most likly becouse this is Becouse even kaido at his peak didnt go beyond Level and you have to factor Is that deveL fruit is what Sets someone apart kaido being immortal doesnt maKe him powerful its hiS body and The dragon Devel fruit plus he lacks something every ones have and thats is experienc Right now he is like a todler with powerful weapon that he doesnt use the right way Otherwise how can you justfy garp being in beyound level he is normal most likl he just has body Like kaido and grand master at haki and experience That the mc lacks he didnt realy fight alot
Just asking is that it for his body ? It wont get stronger by evolving again ? Becouse i think his body should get stronger Like kaido There is a theOry that He has adaptele body so he can become immune To laws like death time etc and thats why he cant die becouse hope the mc can become more overpowered
Great novel but what will you do in time after roger become king to luffy Going to the seas Please dont say he is going to the future With time devil or that he be In prison that would be the worst i think joing Whitebeard and controling things around the world would be nice or just do a time skip showing him every 5 years Or So remeBer there is (imm ) and he lived about 800 years NoW he will Need sometime to catch up