spacemangoes

You took the thoughts right from my mind. In addition, the writing is hard to follow. It's a shame because the premise and the world sounded great, but unfortunately, I had to drop it.

The writing style is hard to follow and doesn't have a natural flow. Most of the time, you'll only understand what's happening after reading a few sentences ahead. Regarding the main character, he's just a simp. He was shown to be clever but immediately came off as a weak-minded individual. It feels like a chore to read at this point. Dropping at chapter 18.

Starts out good. Decent concept with a steady progessive development. MC is essentially a eunich with a hypocriticla moral compass. The author spends copicous amount of time describing how beautiful the female leads are. It gets to the point where 90% of the chapters are just about about how beautiful it is when female leads fart. and with this. I had to drop this series. Only if author got laid IRL atleast a couple of times every year, this would have been one hell of a stroy. The story begins well, introducing a decent concept with steady, progressive development. However, the main character comes across as essentially a eunuch with a hypocritical moral compass. The author dedicates copious amounts of time to describing the beauty of the female leads. It reaches a point where around 90% of the chapters focus solely on the beauty of these characters, and how every move they make, and every fart they take is perfection. This excessive focus led me to drop the series. Perhaps if the author had real-life experiences or relationships, this story could have been exceptional.