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Truth be told i don’t really understand mais reaction to losing here, she’s already known karura was a lot better than her- and she’s already beaten some elites to get here, and karuras contributed to her current strength also. I can see that it’s something in the heat of the moment but it’s just feels misplaced

Why does Danzo have jokes T.T - I wonder what his game is, maybe the Danzo in this fic really is more moderate but it feels like a facade and i’m more inclined to believe his end goal is having kushina become a part of root once she’s ’given up’. Great chapter and welcome back, hopefully your new abode has its issues sorted out soon!

It’s very good, i think could use a bit more care in its editing but i’ve noticed very few issues.

Even though we make fun of it, it’s really unlikely that megumi died before Yukas birth.

Overall this is quite cool, the original setting of lore olympus was pretty interesting but that author really had to run it to the ground. This is a lot more interesting, but what follows thus period will really make or break this fic.

repeat chap

Li?

So far it’s pretty solid, it’s just reached the point where I expect this to start picking up though.

Just wanted to let you know this has been translated on this site up to ~ 150 chaps and is still being updated regularly. So far this translation is slightly better but there’s a long way to go

This was really fun lmao, highly recommended!