Take all my gems and my money if you release more chapters!!!

I hate when people do fan fics that dont make Sense. Nen is Part of the hunter X hunter universe no one Should be able to Use it in AnOther UniverSe. the mc can Use it because he got it from a wiSh. unless god said hes making Nen apart of thE vampire diaries then that would make sense Why other people can use it

If your going to do a dc and marvel fusion then you Better have an Idea of how iTs going to work and a clear plot because both universes literally have too Much information and too many characters with their own stories. I dont want to see this get dropped Because you dont Know where to take it because you bit off more than you can chew

Im not gonna lie i feel like you ended up Kicking yourself because you gave The mc the arc of embodiment Which basically makes him like a god so theres no reason for certain scenarios To play out. Like him needing time to teleport When he can just create perfect teleportation or GIve himself infinite energy. not to mention with all the powers he has and can have he Can just body everyone. So the father getting taken away doesnt make sense and him escaping or encountering certain situations doesnt make sense. I feel like your following the ploT of the novel because if you change it too much you dont Know where to take it. I think you should rewrite the Story And Change the Powers given to the mc so it actually makes sense for things to happen. like if the mc only Had the power to copy other mutants powers but he still had to master the Them himself then it would make sense whY he woould have trouble teleporting or why he would have to eScape Since hes op but Not too Much yet

I kinda like it i hate Goodie two shoes mc so im glad hes gonna be colder plus most Fan fics that change the plot of the Story drastically usually dont Know where to take it afterwards and end Up dropping the Novel so dont Completely change the plot if you dont know where to take it and the uchiha clan surviving is a big plot change

I love the fan fic so far just try not to rush anything a lot of authors rush the Story and end up getting stuck so fhey drop the movel

If this dude has lived for a million years in his dimension why is he such a wuss crying. Its not very realistic since Asgardians arent a very emotional race their warriors not cry babiee

I Hope he gets more Superpowers how else will he stand a chance in the dc universe

Bro its your Book and your art you shouldnt have to write warnings or messages if they like the book great if they dont then leave. continue doing you. i like Everything so far. The gay part through me off but i didnt think anything of it because it didnt impact the story i just moved on and continued reading

If Jor el comes back some how that would be bs because even kryptonians will die if they go to close to the sun because there cells will be overloaded with energy

What would he need a weapon for he’s already op and a weapon just makes it redundant

If your confident in figuring out how to implement them and continue the story instead of dropping the story when it gets difficult the do xmen but if your not just keep it simple and stick to mcu