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You may want to have someone edit this. You have a good story, but your sentences are hard to read. Ut's like, u did a slap and paste for the translation.

u need to go back through and edit the right levels of soul cultivation one minute they are a soul elder or soul ancestor the next they are a soul emperor

your patreon says its been removed

love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dude, u just copied. i am whitebeard, though u did make it easier to read.

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That's ok. We will be waiting to continue reading. Hopefully, u dont keep us waiting to long

Dude, you continuously repeated yourself to the point I could read past chapter 10.

I don't usually write these, but I enjoy reading your book, so I hope you continue and find your confidence again. Just remember it's your story. Write how u believe it should go and enjoy yourself. I hope everything turns out well

more updates please great story so far