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so mc needs an army to defeat freeza? in the end he needs to hug the thighs of the protagonist. so whats the use of the system then?ancient bloodline? as depicted mc likes to train and enjoys life much. eating,shitting and sleeping. wake up then eat then brushing teeth. when he perspired he take a bath with shampoo. before sleep he will watch movie. so mc needs to lick peoples ass to defeat freeza
to answer your question sakura is okay but the story itself is bad. imagine mcs mother scare a hokage who is ninja god by a stare? thats ridiculous itself. the way your mc presents itself is a useless bum who cant decide for herself just lile a typical idiot. your chapter are very short, i guess uou did this to make many chapters. just look at the rating, its one of the lowest here. its shows that this story is bad. i doubt those give high ratin to your story are family, friends and neighbors
Stop being a dick. Commenters/reviewer have there own of view. If the novel is good then review is good and if novel is bad then is will be flooded with bad reviews. Sorry to say that this novel is very bad like most written by a child who not even experience in life. If you can take bad reviews just shut up.