I really think the author is a huge fan of Quan Zhi Gao Shou, considering all the names of the ESports characters mentioned in this novel.

King's Avatar? Shouldn't that be President Tao Xuan and Wei?

Thank you very much for this wonderful review! I greatly appreciate this and it motivated me to work hard and polish my skills in writing.

Curiosity is the best weapon to lure a prey and the author seemed to have done just that. First of all, everything that involves revenge is certainly intriguing. The story is good that it got reading nonstop to the point that I didn't even noticed that I was already at the last chapter. Now, I am very curious as how she would execute her plot of revenge to perfection. There are some problems with the grammars, punctuations and how it is written but those are problems that could be polish as the story goes. Other than that I enjoyed reading this novel, especially during bed time with only lampshade to light me and a cup hot chocolate milk to accompany me. Good work author-san!

Don't repeat 'morning' twice. I suggest maybe write it like this... "Nine o'clock on a Friday morning when the sun beamed beautifully, casting a golden glow upon the earth." Nah, that's just too dramatic. anything will do as long as you just remove one of the two mornings.

The overused of 'alas' word is getting cringy and annoying in my opinion. I suggest you limit your usage of this word, Author-san.