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damn. now i have to wait for updates. fun story that doesn't take things seriously until it does. I honestly like how you portrayed the MC. what happens if you're overpowered as fk and you get stronger from messing around? well this fic answers it. you should just go with your original plans rather than ask the readers, who are either brain rot children or no life adults, for opinion.

Interesting so far. I'm glad you have proper explanation of the "system" showing up unlike others who does not bother to explain on why there is a panel in front of them. Let's see where this goes.

boom title drop

Great read. It's unfortunate that it got dropped just when things got interesting. I'd advice to only read the volume 1 as it feels more complete than volume 2 where it just stop abruptly.

It's good and engaging however the clunky and dullness of translation using complicated and uncommon words instead of simple ones is a chore to read. There are no word like 'people' anymore but 'individuals'. 'Stop' became 'ceased'. 'Death/dead' is 'demise/perished'. E.g. "He 'stopped' thinking of it = He 'ceased' thinking of it. It feels weird and uncommon. It's only a few examples but it's certainly ChatGPT's translation quality with few edits from human hands to be consistent. I prefer the easier and simplier translation from early chapters. Easy to read and understand. Easy and fast to imagine.

wow a male guide instead of a hot, sexy, jade skin, woman or a cute fairy loli. shocking.

should have gone with thunderjizz. i bet anyone who see and read this name would shiver deep inside in their bones