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Hey bro.. Your concept is amazing, and the novel has great potential.. My advice is to re-read your chapter before publishing it so you won't miss something important. Good luck, bro, and keep writing. Don't lose hope.

The common populace survived on protein mix from the fruit of the vines that grown over the walls and had contained all necessary nutrients and was especially cheap, please re-read your chapters because there are missing details.. just delete this after reading it..

I'll just emphasize the use of comma before using "and"

I'm planning on rewriting everything after I sorted out my plot.. thanks

Thanks for the review bro.. Hoping that you'll like the rest of the story.. Thanks

I love how the author describes the scenes very well. I also love it how to author dropped small details or remove flowery words just to lengthen the chapters and sentences. The story is great and you won't regret reading it........ Good luck author!

I love the character development. The world background is awesome and well described.... Keep up the good work Author........................................

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