Cough, cough. I apologize for the near endless amount of mistakes. I assure you you're not the only one who's cringing spotting the mistakes during a re-read. I'm definitely not proud of them but it'd be a gigantic task to edit over a thousand chapters. So...I guess the only logical thing I can do is to ensure proper editing from now on. Peace.

1. No issues, I am always open to criticism, however harsh it could be. We all have our blindspots, weaknesses and omissions. In something very subjective like a story, listening to what readers say is important. Need not agree with everything, but listening surely doesn't hurt. 2. Can you elaborate on lack of clarity part? I feel its mostly lacking a vision of end goal and overarching as well as interconnected plotlines. But what were you referring to? 3. Thanks a lot for your well wishes. From my side, I hope you find stories you love, stories that make your life even a little better. Cheers!

Thanks for the honest feedback. Yes, Pala arc would've benefitted from better decisions and proper character arcs.

I'm really sorry for the late reply. Yes, I agree with what you point out to a large degree. In fact, the story changes Post Abyssals made me wonder if the story got better or worse multiple times. A prime reason is that Abyssal Saga, despite the tremendous changes it went through always had a proper end goal and a clear vision. Cosmic Saga too has an end goal but the vision wasn't as clear. It was changing rapidly with each volume, especially at the start. Another major reason mentioned is pacing. I personally think its less pacing problem and more my fault, lacking a vision for character arcs and moments in the volumes that followed. I ended up reading your review and reply multiple times since it was the most honest feedback about Pre & Post story in memory. For the story as a whole, I'd say pacing had been the biggest issue. Some arcs really needed to be cut down to let the story be compact and intense. And of course, thanks a lot for the feedback. Have a very good day.

Below. Its going to end quicker than you think.

Hi, thanks a lot for your feedback. Can you elaborate more on this? I really want to learn more. You could do it here or if it's convenient, we could talk on discord. ( The link should be in synopsis iirc). I haven't had a proper review or feedback of the novel comparing pre and post abyssal saga. So, I'm really looking forward to hearing from you.

He is built from 1. slivers 2. Keman and Yami (strongest divine rankers)

Thanks, I do wish I could change large bits of the beginning sometimes, but it is what it is. I take the advice to heart. Of course, stay hydrated.

"Nah, I'd win."

Barely two weeks passed for Varian since their last battle and Immortal spent 1000 years training. Its not going to be easy at all.

Its purely because of the slivers, not due to the paths. Varian in rank 9 had already crushed Immortal when the latter was at peak of pseudo divine. The battle now is against a slivers weilding Immortal.

Fairy Maid

If Sia is a cunning fox, Sarah a stable siberian tigress and Isadora a proud dragon, then Enigma would be an innocent rabbit.

My bad, I was assuming you were assuming something else and gave some replies. Laying this out for sake of clarity: A. Hortus is Varian's, but Sarah is also given a degree of authority. Due to Varian being peak 9 & Sarah being divine rank, Hortus timeflow was 20x compared to normal. This is for everyone except divone rankers and those made exempt by Sarah. including rank 9s. B. Dozen peak 9s appeared in Hortus in 10,000 years. Yes, thats 500 years. And yes, that is crazy. But thats a reason why Synthetic Worlds are so valued even though they only provide a fraction of thos timeflow. However, most of them are flawed and would affect progress in rank 9. So, theyre used to mass train upper ranks by sacrificing their prospects

Yeah, they restricted their powers to spend more time with him. This way, only a few days or weeks pass outside while they would be living together for months.

Hortus timeflow clarification: Outside : 1 year Hortus divines: 1 year opt outs : 1 year Everyone else: 20 years. I am really sorry for replying late which led you to being caught up in a web of misunderstandings. RIP those brain cells. If there is any further doubt, I am willing to write an essay here to explain than see another misunderstanding.

Its 1000. Hortus has same timeflow for everyone before Varian left. thats why the difference in Mortal and Celestial time flows was no longer maintained That makes the achievements more realistic but very impressove nonetheless. Hortus can easily contend for the top kingdom spot im another 20k years

The difference was erased before Varian left. Its same time for everyone now (except those who are give opt put by Sarah). so, 1000 years outside and 20,000 for everyone

It's something they deliberately chose not to do. There was a real fear that once they crossed the line, they'd keep doing it as a means of escape from reality and lose themselves in it.