“Waiting by a stump for a hare” was a quote. I read that the animal he found was a puppy a few paragraphs ago. Perhaps it was edited and corrected?

College freshmen have to dorm in a lot of colleges, especially in China

I have a maid service. They show up and vacuum, clean the bathrooms, and once a month wipe down for dust. Low pay and annoying work conditions but nothing bad…

Copyright alert! Copyright alert!

It made the wind blood? They will need more showers after this meeting

Dyfed, Powys, Gwent & Gwynedd were the kingdoms of the Britons. I wonder which one is now “Lioness”?

Salem Could be Sabrina’s cat...

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

Thanks! I am just happy that you picked the story back upmafter having left it static for so long.

Was the ancestor named Heinz Doofenshmirtz?

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Yay commitment! Been a fan since there were only 6 of the otiginal version’s chapters. I sleays liked this story more than DC. Guess I am just weird like that.

I am not arguing with you, but even using your numbers, you are overcharging by quite a bit. Lets say 1000 words per chapter, and 100 are repeated If you remove the repeated words, and consolidate down, you would see a repeated pattern of 1000 new words, 800 new words and then again at 1000 new words but you charge for all 3 at 1000 words. If you look at chapters 113 and 114, i didnt count the words, but you can see that more than an entire page, about 15 conversation paragraphs are repeated. Is that a third? No. Is it, in my opinion, a lazy way to up your word count? Yes. Did i think that your story had enough promise that I paid stones to keep reading it, even though (using your numbers) I paid for 10 chapters but only read enough new work for 9? Yes. Until I realized that my hope that you would over come your weakness and would make the work worth what you were chargIng for it was dashed. If you wrote without a page of repeated work at the start of every chapter I would still be reading, and still paying. You have chosen to offer a work and write it the way that you do. I have chosen to give my feelings on it. Had you said “Thank you for your feedback, I will take your feedback and see if I can use it to make a stronger and more appealing work” vs the vitriol you said, I would have likely picked the story back up in 6 months or so. Due to your attitude in your reply, i now will not. But keep writing. I paid for your writing due to you having promise as a writer and you created a good story. And perhaps the rest of your followers will appreciate getting the Full Value of their money for your quality work. No one likes buying a bag of cookies and finding put it isn’t full. The same is true with books.

The surface of the Sun is about... 5,500 Celcius but this is 8,000 degrees Yeah, thats going to happen A blast furnace can’t even get close to that temperature. Magic only goes so far to stretch disbelief before common sense says “but tools melt and skin burns”. Just sayin’.