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Most iterations of Superman have magic resistance barely above that of an ordinary man.
Couldn't he have Kimimaro swallow a half dozen explosive tags, ignite them, and switch back to his body before they explode
I'm assuming the author keeps replacing the Utatane and Mitokado clans with random clans.
The previous paragraph says 15 to both attack and dueling, in this paragraph they are both 12?
Stopped reading halfway through when you were explaining your thoughts while writing. Sorry, but I want to enjoy the delicious pie not hear a lecture on how it was invented.You have a good story and I really enjoy reading it. After 5 chapters I knew you knew what you were doing. I rarely leave comments on stories I read, I'll try to change that in hopes of tipping the balance and not loosing this story.
I think you reversed the time difference.
Loved the Rick and Morty addition. 👍
Perfect Deadpool 👍
Land of Rain would be difficult unless a river in Land of Rivers has a deep enough channel all the way through the country.
30+70=120 ???
What does this mean? Are they tougher to pop? Do they have 100x his strength when created?
Three fruits in each category? So, Three fruits, one in each category-> Three fruits total with one of each? Or, Three fruits in each category-> Nine fruits total eating three in each of the three categories?
100,000 days actually
two men one woman
Why do you write paragraphs out of order?
I know the translator has no control over the story, but can we please be done with this ark? Originally I was really interested in reading this story because of the novelty of this system. And while there were clear face slapping elements to the story, even the long ones, like the competition, were spaced out with other plots in between.
Didn't he active his sage mode earlier thus making his eyes red?