The story is good. Its pace is not slow and grammatically correct. Its just that the MC's behavior is little unsettling as it seems he has not understood his present situation, maybe author will make him mature as the plot develops. Overall, a must read story with a proper world background.
Hey guys, shameless author here. As it is my first work, please comment if you find anything wrong and i will reply and rectify it as soon as possible. Need your support for the book. Thanks and keep reading.