Kc995

Hey If u Read it is this book any good ??

Overall the story is good but I think the mc is getting way too strong wayy too fast coz of the system...... Read till around chapter 40 Seems more like a slice of life nd there's barely any conflict or problem for the mc just smooth sailing I think the main problem for me is the mc progression is wayyyy tooo fast

Honestly the story started out fine but around chapters 50-60 it turned into AI reprent garbage.... repeated chapter's with minor changes, name swapping characters stopped fallowing any logic and for some reason everyone he meets is his brother or nephew/ something (making him uncle ????) .....WTF

Did the mc's name change from merlin to evin ????? And what.......

Seriously good job Great story

Any update ??? How's it ?

Overall ita an amazing story. . . Only the ending seems a bit rushed Would be a lot better if the last chap was extended by another 2 to 3 chapters . Still enjoyed it a lott

Overall amazing story(if u like dark and vengeful mc)..... But I would love to see a bit of the story before the Uchiha massacre. . . . . ....

Holy shit that got really dark...... Last 4/5 chap you can see itachi slip to crazy