this is so confusing again you keep saying its the jian clans sword style is the death fortress but its the stripper sword that belongs to the jian clan dead fortress belongs to ling tailong or w.e that protagonist's name was you have chapters named death fortress vs death fortress you should read the people in your discord general chat you would not keep making this mistakes stuff like this ruins a good story and this is not the first time

aphrodite is not ares brother wife but his uncles

it was not her he used the one he used the devil kept

granddaughter*

never fix this error it's good

I don't recommend it really really really slow burn it's awful

do you mean "so was" instead of so did?

you wrote I'll need your help one again instead of once again you forgot the c

sending I'm straight to the hospital? did you mean sending him straight to the hospital?

what I'm straight to the hospital did u mean him?

do you mean are you instead of do you?

yea what's the point of swearing the oath if they break it nothing happens to them

chapters take so long to come out I forget who is who it's great novel but I can't follow along with these release days

it's a very long very slow burn u check the wiki you see the mc powers and stuff you think cool but then you start reading the novel you question what your doing with your life

you wrote quality over quantity but u wrote that he wanted a minimum of 20 members did you mean maximum?

so they will be chess pieces? kinda reminds me of the antagonist organization in mär heaven thought there chess pieces signified the level of the person

lol to be the power in the shadows