What about you also post this and future works on Scribble Hub and Royal Road? You can't have too many readers.

Just make her shoot already. It's a thirteenth filler chapter straight after they entered space. C'mon.

The best answer of the best mother.

Please show us how Gasper and Valerie are doing.

So, Silvia was actually the luckiest one of Shiro's disciples, huh.

Are you sure Kaname is an Uchiha and not a pure-blood Uzumaki with some kind of hair color and eyeballs mutation?

Also i've been wandering for a while why Kaanme's MS and EMS doesn't have three-axis symmetry like they usually does? What is that some kind of genetic mutation or just author's arbitrariness?

If/when/why they get married will Utakata be 'Utakata Uchiha' or just 'Utakata'(because I don't remember him having a surname)? And what the children's surnames are? Why they don't Edo Tensei Kushina as well? There are a lot of bandits roaming around. One more one less...

Wanted to ask you, what do you think about the 'Uchiha brother's axiom'? Like two Uchiha brothers unlocks MS and just exchange their eyes to unlock EMS. Sure it hard to imagine in normal Uchiha family (two all-hated bastards will never agree to get themselves blinded in front of each other. And even more they'll never agree to get themselves blinded in front of the third person, no matter who it is) but we have not so regular Uchiha family there, so... And what could happen if Kaname(two EMS) exchange one of her eyes with her brother (one MS) to get him EMS what do you think? Also when would Uchiha Plate appear?

The speed of Shangri-la's growth simply make no sense to me. The world's economic just no working that way. No matter how 'Heaven on the Earth' it is it simply needs more time. A lot more time. Especially when it comes to a medieval society with it's lack of fast traveling devices and poor information distribution. If you'd say it was 3-5 years I would believe that but only one month!? A one big NO. The said merchants would be only on a way to Shangri-la. And bandits? Where did they come from if it was a wastelands before? I get that you try to show how marvelous that new county is but the world doesn't work that way. Even fantasy world.

So Kaname's schizophrenia speaks in a wild mix between Japanese, old Russian, Thai, Chinese, Hindi(?), Armenian(?). Anything else?

It's all good and all but newly born children ALWAYS have blue eyes. The color changes only after couple of months.

Who is the 'Human Queen'? Is there a 'Human Queen' at all?

But you have to agree that Kaname is more suitable candidate for Hat that Tsunade. While Tsunade have + From founder clan + Strongest kunoichi alive (yet) + Famous healer - Unwilling candidate - Ran away from village - Gambling addiction - Alcoholism - Has no love for the village Kaname have + From founder clan + One of the strongest kunoichi + Famous healer + Not a Granny + Has support of ALL shinobi clans of Konoha + Was prepared for the Hat by the Third + Kaname mostly likes Konoha + The Mother Of Dra--- The Sister and lover of Konoha's jinchurikis +- Have blackmail on many village powerholders +- Have two newborn(!) children - Unwilling candidate - Pranker - No support from the civilians - A little support from the Elders So with both of them unwilling for the Konoha's throne, Hiruzen must choose the one the most beneficial for the village and that's not Tsunade-sama. And if Kaname use her 'Blackmail-card'... Well he will be Hokage no more so it has 60% less power. P.S. I can see Kaname and Tsunade use 'International-women's-solidarity-no-jutsu' and pass the Hat to Jiraya.

With the beginning of the chuunin exams I have only one question. How? Just how are you gonna make Tsunade wear the 'red hat'? In the original Tsunade became a hokage because there were no other choice but her. You have someone better and stronger footing rather than Tsu-chan.

And... What your thoughts about that 'Yurika Ichijou' girl my fellows? Because original is holy sh1t gods forsaken netorare. Like classical ABC Netorare. And i can hardly imagine how can she be 'rescued' to mc's harem. Btw. Don't you think there're too many females with similar sounding names (Yuria, Yurika, Yariko). 3 out of 6...

Just one thing. Ilya it's a boy's name.

Well, as far as I remember she could duel anyone 1x1 with help of her 'Throne World' couldn't she? Or did she lost it somehow?

MAYDAY! MAYDAY! IT'S PIANO IN THE BUSHES! I REPEAT! IT'S PIANO IN THE BUSHES!

You intended to make Phae a lesbian. So when would she get a girl?