His head below do the talking

Soldiers never take it slow. They just go hit and run

smells like rival but "kiss in the knuckles" seems off idk

nice ch. 2

awesome intro

pros: a promising opening and the twist caught me, didn't expect it. cons: feels rush still keep on writing, great!

I hope there's a que when its the 3rd person narrator and the 1st person narrator. the bottled water is cute

i like this scene