Maximillian

Damn, didn't expect Wolverine and Sabertooth to make an appearance

Saying no to your mother? Death would be easier punishment

The book starts off well but does not pace itself well. The MC is not behaving like a normal 30 year old, I expect a lot more maturity and discipline from a 30 year old doctor. Then there's the story, there is potential in the story to make a it a great book but right now it's a decent book because the mc is getting pulled it situations for no reason. The problem with "trouble following mc" troupe is that it gets boring really fast and you are not able to develop the world and characters around the MC. Like how tf did Anna fall so fast in love with him? With one meeting she already has a crush?? Why did he have to kneel infront of Lorraine? Why does the GM hate him so much?? And then bam suddenly the priestess is kidnapped and mc is being blamed, and now he has to fight off the entire city to prove his innocence?? LIKE WHERE THE FUCK IS THE PACING IN THIS STORY!? There is only gas here but gas to where? Why? Why are we in such a hurry to progress? You haven't even explained the background of the MC properly...

So basically he's an idiot

Confusing backstory but I guess I have to accept it

There's no way Darren did that without a contract.... Surely he knows the ins and outs of the financial world better than anyone... I feel like he's not using his brain enough

Uhh...a little plothole here, when exactly did this happen? From their interaction earlier, it seemed she was genuinely sad and in love with him. Now suddenly she's being used to keep him locked and whispered things to him? Are we creating scenarios out of the hat??

But this is not normal cheating tbh, the cheating happened 10 years later. There's a big difference in cheating happening soon and a decade later

But it's not like it happend in a week right? This happened over 10 years in the future, so technically her mind has not been changed, YET. But it doesn't it won't change again. You don't know how driven or ambitious the MC was in the previous life. The story did mention that the mc did let people walk over him. Perhaps her mind changed because of seeing his behaviour.

Okay this seemed a bit unnecessary, I get that this is a fantasy book and all of that but there should be some elements to ground the book in reality and THIS is a big stretch. Highly doubt a doctor and nurse can force someone to do all of this. I get that you're trying to build pressure but please don't do this kinda thing again because this makes it seem like a Chinese novel with unnecessary drama and potholes....