this chapter is just too repetitive .. remember is not free and if you can't move forward the bok will be a joke .. people will loose in interest...

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

it seems you are out of s constructive idea same old logic... this is a waste of time and not a good suspense just done with.....

I can't understand the way you think this plot is too childish... how hard is it, for Lucas to let her know of his accomplishment... I think it is too narrow minded and just a child novel.. you think of a matured way of arranging plot... This a child novel. even though Lucas want to test the water by testing her wife.... he shouldn't be this calm and be seeing her wife been molested over what he can give her... or better still move from the Carter house and get a mansion of his own..... 😍😍😍😍😍😍 .pls think of a better way to keep us in suspense that this childish way of thinking....

hmm!