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And this, my guy, is called marriage!
it's strange the reports didn't mention the docks on the 4th asteroid belt. It should be impossible to keep something hidden that so many people know about. Not to speak of gigantic ships using the asteroid to get rid of their cargo. The ppl that made those reports could not have spend more then a couple days on it... kinda dumb...
the only thing that bothers me is the scale of the military and the human race in general. what i mean by that is that the humans are an interplanetray species and the military should be gigantic. But it never feels that way. The military trainging camps are half empty, he always runs into the same people and the Mission after his first Semester in the academy feels like it involves a hundred students or sth even tho it is treated like a major event for the military. BUT, in the most rescent arc that changes. The scale starts to feel much more believable and if the author keeps that up then i have nothing to complain about anymore :D
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This is one of the best Storys i have ever read on this app. The characters feel so genuine and refreshing its honestly amazing. The balance between the 2 protagonists characters and there romance is written to absolute perfection My only point of criticism would be this story would really profit from a bit of proove reading. Dont get me wrong it is by no means badly written, its just that sometimes there is a word too much or a Word missing etc. doesnt really effect the reading in any dramatic way tho.