love it

harem please

[img=recommend][img=exp] wow i think you out did yourself today! I'm really impressed

you being to many heavy hitter to quickly and now put you hero into a problem

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vanalana

I like the ideas

your mc has a death wish. also didn't he know that 2b more advance ai defense the what timeline he in marvel. also 2b been fight robot in the future, the robot there would used hack abilities as well which means 2b shouldn't be able to be hack, and 2b said her self she loyal to you but more of your safety

I login for the story, then logout

I loved it, please continue 🙂

why do you keep calling Retau him. There was a lot of typo in these chapter

I loved this story way better than the other one. thank you

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so I kind of like your story but I dislike the main character. I'm not sure what his future plan is? I thought maybe after kingpin he will stop killing but is he planned to be a serial killer all his life? if so maybe a character change is necessary at this point now

I agree with them, their team is too small and not enough vacation time. he needs to summon more people. I know he is doing his best but the problem is her working them too hard. plus the more he has the better point. I would summon sona, and vader

My thoughts on your story so far is that it's really good. your story is immersed, more putting me into the story more realism. Good job!

hmm well look like the government can order the destruction of a kingdom belonging to his alliance without him retaliating. government: = 1 point the oc := -1 point this will stop people from joining his kingdom. I don't care how powerful is kingdom is. if I was in there I would go with one who has the power right away for my safety.

One of the best ideas I've ever read and I like where you're going with this

The main hero needs to grow a pair. He's been sitting in the back seat for way too long. Now he just missed another harem members.