PieceofSh1tApp

It's not just a story being written, it's specifically curated electrical brain synapses that came from thought without emotions, precise, cold, deatached. Every finger movement that typed the story...calculated, improved with every stroke, evolution of letters into words in real time. This is how the story sounds for the couple of chapters i could endure without getting bored from word vomit, repetition, and emotionally flat characters. Author mentioned the use of AI and I still gave it a shot because I like Prototype allot but, there's not just "some use", it's blatantly obvious that most of it is AI. If you're gonna use it, at least read the chapters yourself bro, it's not hard to revise your work and see how repetitive it gets. Anyway, it's a no from me, hopefully you improve on the story and stop relying so heavily on AI.

Mc has a hero complex but does nothing to overcome his weaknesses. I'm up to chapter 15 and he just broods constantly about his inability to help but does nothing else like being actively involved in bad situations. Whenever he does something it's completely meaningless to the plot and changes nothing.

The Omnitrix has this protocol on speed dial

It's good so I'd like that

I wish you the best and for your bad phase to end author. Or at least for you to become stronger from it. Your chapter helped me alot.

One of my few 5 Star reviews, definitely a great story with good pacing, likeable Mc, and interesting premise (not sure if it's gonna go how i think it will but i hope it does, too cool not to). Only slight downside would be that the mc is a bit lucky to get his hands on stuff in the beginning but nothing that can't be overlooked tbh. Love the few chapters that are out, if you're looking for a cyberpunk fanfiction this is a great one.

Definitely a story to keep in mind when giving stones. So far this is a great.

True bro’s

For me this is the first fanfic i read from you so I'm not sure about the others. But I've really liked the slice off life and the development of the characters, not just thragg learning to be more human and slightly changing but from all the characters. I like the world building you do and how you show everything changing bit by bit. Nothing seems like it's happening too fast or too slow. I'll be honest and tell you that i started reading this by pure coincidence and thought I would drop it but I'm so glad I got my eyes on it. I look forward to webnovel now for one more fanfic other than Meta essence gacha in marvel. Would definitely like seeing more of your work.

Good development from the story and really interesting premise. The mc is pretty realistic and likeable. I like it.