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but its also her fault that they were even in that situation
because if they did none of this would of happened because they would of already known
doesn't this guy showing up all the time basicly leave a trail back to klein
they don't have day or night cycle but have a town called afternoon
translation: I need to force the main character into a fight to show off how strong he is now so I'm going to remove any intelligence he has
or its just a old gun and a blood moon
this is written like we are mean to recognise the name or country we don't
its more like she realised that he's strong and that's changed her mind because now he has value to her if he was weak she would still be treating him like trash
OK so I guess the meat has levels too and that does something I mean genes but what does that actually mean what's the difference between opened and filled why is there such a huge difference between amon and anyone else even if they are nearly the same level like I know he's different but I have no frame of reference of what is a normal power level eveyone in that tournament either gave up or got 1 shot
still haven't been told who this guy is author I mean we can work out its his brother but your initial world building is awful not trying to sound like a duck when I say this but it comes across like you wrote down everyone's relationships on a bit of paper before you started and are assuming we have all that information too
the daughters were never told im honestly surprised the dad didn't tell them because he seems like a genuinely nice guy who understands that amon might be grieving but he slipped up by not telling his kids
put this at the top please so I don't feel like ives missed 5 chapters I had a legit headache trying to understand why he was abandoned until now
julius your great but mabey tell your daughters that the people he was living with just died so he's still grieving or something you know so they don't think he's just being moody or something
and I know it says she's actually 26 but that is literally the opposite of how the last chapter explained everything
I'm still confused from the whole time thing does that means she's actually 7 and a half if her body looks 13 because he's 6 months old and looks 1
hes not suffering that's the whole point of the skill it prevents him from feeling bad about the fact he can't get close to anyone easily
or and this is just a thought make the people fight without guns seeing as the long you wait the harder it will be you can't just keep throwing guns at them even if they are system guns unless the author decides to retcon the whole only get energy if you kill them on your own thing
I like how these random goblins that are going to die soon get names but his maids are referred to as stuff like middle aged maid and younger maid
dude they literaly told you the person measuring you was a guy pay attention