CAGS

Everything after chapter 70 is massive doodoo shit. Made me drop after the silver and gold duo turned human. It was so stupid and uncharacteristic.

wtf is happening lmao😅. also, a bunch of wrong names.

One of the best dd2 fanfics right now. Don't know if translation or original but the writing quality is probably better than most fanfics in webnovel. Excellent pacing too, no super unnecessary parts just to fill the word count, Love the part with Little Gold. Also love the gradual romance happening, hope it being harem doesn't ruin it later as having too big of a harem means a lot of chapters need to be dedicated on each one so they won't be relegated to the background. Great work on this TL/Author(IDK which one).

Interesting story. if every other chapter weren't about the mc sleeping with his women this would be better. pacing is massively slow otherwise.

making genryuusai say "gentlemen" feels weird tbh.

gunbai gunbai gunbai gunbai gunbai

continue pls. the other translation isn't as good as this one. the sentences there is so xianxia like it ruins it for me

shiyu? how did utaha turn into that lmao

looks the same as a thousand other systems lmao. this is the most basic shit