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awesome as ever I have question about the next worth with will probably be fate and probably grand order timeline (solomon) what about altera (veber), gaia, counter force, types, beasts, alien god, I suppose the best way to deal with it would be to ignore them 0.0 ...
i don't see the problem with the new website :D
awesome chapter I think that you have reason and you can come to this story when hxh will have more content so maybe in like 20 years :D ? or when author of the original dies and you will be able to spin what ever you want ( MAD SNAIL I AM LOOKING AT YOU who makes 1 chapter per month?)
since you stated that Mikasa new hatsu is not op then, in my opinion, its overall loss you could have made Mikasa into many things such as : -Alluka Zoldyck/Nanika V.2.0 -Sparing partner that actually won't backstab you (Goku and Vegeta) -owner of the noble phantasm/creature from Nasuvarse -future reader V.2.0(Neon Nostrade) while yes some of these abilities you can't achieve while being conjurer as we saw with kurapika this hardly end of the road + materials from dark continent + compass and now you made here in nothing but doll you can study...
well idea and plot aren't that bad for Fan-fic now what's good and what's bad the plot is kinda cool but sometimes boring :( I don't know what it is but sometimes I just skip parts of chapter :( the wishes thing is not bad definitely better than wishing some OP thing and then the whole plot flops or just transforms in total crackfic In my opinion, A/N is kinda useless in story you can write it in comments... soo to sum it up : not bad could use some editing in my opinion