kankup4

awesome as ever I have question about the next worth with will probably be fate and probably grand order timeline (solomon) what about altera (veber), gaia, counter force, types, beasts, alien god, I suppose the best way to deal with it would be to ignore them 0.0 ...

Well great dragon ball novel I think author created a very nice protagonist with few plot holes that is quite smart. Im very happy that author was able to find his mistakes by himself (in the last chapter) and acknowledge them ! Overall awesome dragon ball fanfic and one of my favorites!

thanks

i dont get it... the treasure!

that's ... a lot of flaws in his domain if even the visit to secret realm still left some flaws

i don't see the problem with the new website :D

dont forget about the sword!!

awesome chapter I just chope there won't be a Jor-El Gold coming from the dead that would be a ... bad writing :)

awesome chapter I think that you have reason and you can come to this story when hxh will have more content so maybe in like 20 years :D ? or when author of the original dies and you will be able to spin what ever you want ( MAD SNAIL I AM LOOKING AT YOU who makes 1 chapter per month?)