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So far: if you look past the names of places being off, bds being called mewtwos, stories solid. You'll find other translations of the story with fully different plots at some points, other people saying the line or plot differnrt. If anyone can find me the untranslated version to see it might help. There might be the story under another name not sure. But this translation seems more coherent then the others. Reading both is like 2 multiverse of same story almost.

Bro it's like a dating Sim or a op self insert dream no issues ever

Also he somehow knows Lucy's name without he mentioning it and she's not suspicious. Somehow knows Evelyn stealing relic and not very large reaction. Sus af.

At where I am in the story I have critiques. Not sure how to feel about pretty instantly surpassing the power level of all chrome people. Also everyone somehow knows he's u chromed, but the things he does is straight up supernatural. Like I'd assume people would think some kind of internal Chrome they can't detect or he's some experiment but other then wow he has no chrome nothing else happens. Also Lucy and Rebecca instantly liking him. Like you'd assume super samurai might be connected to evil Japanese corp and cause worry but no instant flirting no hesitation. No introduction of ki or anything just, mc bei g able to use zoros abilities no repercussions. I know that's the point of template but maybe people question it or the scaling being different.

Enjoying this read, but you'll have to let pass some things. Enjoying the physics implementation, but my issues are with the comic representations. Mc is born from Tony Stark but like instantly surpasses his knowledge, instantly solving SSS, instantly getting sorceror Supreme level knowledge. Author underestimates the level of ability marvel characters should have. If Odin and Yao were stronger, more knowing of the universe (like the thousands of years gotta do something) and Tony had more intuitive genius, even if we say same level as Mc.

We can now canonically excuse stupidity in Mc from brain development issues from alchahol 🤣

Writing this cause of all the negative reviews, yall are crazy let a man who got isekai have some trauma if I was given a million dollars randomly I'd be suspicious as hell and this man was given superpowers and transfered to all be knew as a fictional world. Wish fate could lead him to some therapy but we'll have to see lol

Gym, daughter, car congratulations Don! !!

I've been saving uo chapters on here and reread and now to wait 😭😭😭