Oh dang! I might be daring, but Youruichi for the win!!!

Thank you for the chapter!

Thus far this seems a promising start. I like this book, but I hope the stability and standards continue like this. If you want to read a book, a promising one, give this a chance.

thx for the chapter!

Will you post more chapter if I comment a review?

Thx for the chapter!

oh, ciri is it

Finally I can read on web! Thanks for the chapter!

I am sure there was a lightningbender in the Avatar Kyoshi's book, so Sozin should not be the inventor.

There is a lot to say. I was not sure whether I write a review or not, but I read the reviews, and I was surprised. Let's start with our MC. He is a child with daddy issues (should I say he was? Well, I bet he still has issues regardless of Shakespeare's noble phantasm. He is a bright child, who has a lot of libido and thick skin when it comes to flirting, he is nice and slowly getting stronger. AND I LIKE THAT! I have read many fictions, fanfictions on this website. I have written some, and well I saw similar mistakes people and I made. I can list them like: - The progress of Main protagonist, and people around him. (Side cast) I read many fictions where the main protagonist gets stronger in a heartbeat. I usually like the feeling OP mc where he shows people their places, but I mean, even in wuxia people do cultivation. They did not suddenly get stronger and attack the big guy at the top. Therefore, I like this fiction. This is a steady peace, a bit rushed maybe. But it does not feel bad. Quite good actually. - Love Interest(s) I mean I am not a harem guy, I used to be tho. When I started to read fanfictions, harems were everywhere. Since I was new, and I wanted to read my favorite characters having a harem, I liked the idea. Yet most of them were absurd. Now, I will not say this is the perfect example of the development of love interest, but this is indeed great. I like the dialogue between characters and the choices of love interests. I also like they have actual characters, unlike most fiction where they usually stay there to read pretty. Ugh, well. I could write many things. I just re-read this fic, and I do not understand why you guys did not like this. This guy can write wholesome chapters, I enjoy reading fight scenes, I enjoy MC's character, I enjoy FMLs' characters... The list goes on. I mean, I do not like to say read until chapter X or chapter Y. Yet, I'll say try harder to read more. Anyway! Thank you for the delightful book and great commitment you show this art. I hope you will have a bright future ahead of you, author!

Not much of a Dumb it seems. Wonder what will happen :/

Is it just me, or this sentence was a bit odd...

Nothin' to see here. Carry on. Joke aside this is my first time trying original novel, aside from first version, and like any shameless author... I'll give myself 5 star ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I hope you'll like it! Have a great day!

she was in the one of the big dlcs. She is the daughter of the vampire lord

I understand. Thank you for notice. I will be waiting for your new stories if you'll write one.

I see... This part is +18 indeed

I'll roll with MF

I say this in advance, this story 4 star ranking not 5... But since there are cringe people out here, I decided to increase the ranking a bit... Even if it is little. Now, story is not that bad. It has its edges, but the writer is a new one. He had a lot time to improve himself/herself. I have questions about his powers and all, but well, I guess the MC not that cringy, considering other DxD stuff. Now, the MC is OP, very OP, he can win against Ophis, so I do not know what he will do? I mean, he is already strong enough. I do not know what his goals are, so that is a down; but I'll wait this author to improve his writing in this novel, then I'll wait for the next one. I hope you find happiness in writing, because you got talent. Lacking experiences only disappears when you write and read. So, this is too long actually... Meh, whatever. I like your book, hope you'll improve in due time and show the people your story!

Shishoo~!!