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Delirio28

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  • Delirio28
    Delirio285 months ago
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    Writer, it seems you've forgotten about Daisy.

  • Delirio28
    Delirio285 months ago
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    You know, out of everything that's happened in the last few episodes, if I had to say what bothers me most, it's not that Ryan let Emily go with her boyfriend without even trying to convince her to go with him. After all, we've already seen that he has a serious self-confidence problem. No, the problem I see is that despite the emotional connection between them in what they thought were their last moments together, including the fact that it was hinted there might be a spark of something more than just lust, not to mention Ryan's tender treatment of Emily, cleaning her up after sex something I can assure you most guys that age wouldn't be so considerate and attentive to—and then when he tells her about the dream and she starts making plans to test the theory that the seed cures the virus, the point is that despite being that guy's girlfriend, she doesn't seem the least bit guilty or worried about what is clearly infidelity in their relationship. She decides to go with her boyfriend, whom she just cheated on with another man, in addition to everything else I've already mentioned. The worst part is that instead of telling the poor man she slept with someone else and ending their relationship which would be the fairest thing for him and the right thing for her to do, especially considering her strong and decisive personality and the aforementioned spark with Ryan she chooses a different path. After all, he's just a high school boyfriend, the typical popular rugby player cliché, a typical superficial relationship between two overgrown teenagers, plus her plans with Ryan. So, in short, I don't know if it's the writer's inexperience creating such an unpleasant event for what I believe is a large portion of the readership, or if the writer is fixated on a future plot that honestly smells like a textbook cliché. We'll probably discover later that this so-called "seed" is basically Ryan's ability to instantly impregnate infected women, possibly granting both the woman and the baby powers and immunity to the infection. This is surely a plotline involving Ryan searching for Emily and their potential child in who knows what distant chapter of the story. PD: I don't know about others, but doesn't it seem really strange that this super popular and very cliché rugby player hasn't taken the slightest opportunity to sleep with Emily? I'm just saying, and no offense intended, but it seems to me that he's gay and only has a relationship with her because he doesn't want to come out of the closet, considering the very masculine and macho atmosphere among rugby players and the discrimination he would possibly suffer. I'm just saying, maybe it's not like that.

  • Delirio28
    Delirio282 years ago
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  • Delirio28
    Delirio283 years ago
    Commented

    Thanks for The chapters

  • Delirio28
    Delirio283 years ago
    Posted

    Xenophobic protagonist do not read it, those who like the supernatural there are better readings than such garbage. 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬

  • Delirio28
    Delirio283 years ago
    Commented

    If you want to make a good harem novel, don't add useless women, not to mention that instead of supporting the mc, they seem to bring him problems and selfishly endanger the mc by having an affair with him. Because let's face it where there is a model who lives in luxury wanting to put her life in danger and fight alongside the mc. But if she's going to have a character upgrade and she becomes loyal and truly loves the mc. And she's willing to become powerful by becoming a good partner that's fine then. 😍😍😍

  • Delirio28
    Delirio283 years ago
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    So far I'm not very interested in Vanessa, after all when it comes to Waifus material, a model who knows how many guys she's slept with and especially that phrase of hers about friends with benefits makes her look like a b!tch. The problem is that taking all that into account and adding her forced boyfriend of her. She doesn't seem to care about the mc's safety when having an affair with him, if it is supposed to come from a hidden power that can make people disappear given the apparent fear she has of him, that shows that she is a loose and selfish woman. Either that or that woman is stupid proposing to be friends with benefits. Which also leads me to the fact that this boyfriend of hers doesn't seem to care much about the comings and goings of her fiancee, since it would be easy for him to put an escort or secret guards to protect her supposed girlfriend. Of course it could be that the guy is stupid or he doesn't care about her safety, there's also the possibility that he doesn't care that she sleeps with other guys after all you can't expect much from a model it's not that she is. specifically insulting but we all know what the industry of models and actresses is like.