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This one has my vote
You're right, got my math wrong. Thanks for the correction!
Him weighing 3600 pounds under 20 times gravity... am I wrong of does that mean he only weighs 130 pounds... dude must be a stick to only weight that much at his height right? Or am I missing something?
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How far beyond the wall?
Last chapter I noticed a mistake but couldn't comment on it because of Webnovel not letting me comment on that paragraph. Back at Icehill farm and even before that it was mentioned that Caraxes was female and smothered Jon, last chapter they were called a male. Bot sure which it is supposed to be but should probably be fixed for consistency. Also so far in the novel giant wolf has been used instead of direwolf which is what they are actually called. Thanks for the great novel so far!
You need to put the "." after the first 0 otherwise that entire thing can also be read as just 0.1 or a 1 in 10 aka 10% chance...
Can I just say that I hate people using swimmer physique like it's the pinnacle. It's not, it's a body suited for underwater activity and moving through water efficiently not for fighting or combat. How would being a good swimmer and having a physique best suited to swimming make you a good fighter? It doesn't. Just say a MMA fighters physique instead. Its more accurate and it is also more relevant to what they are training in. Unless the MC is aiming to be an Olympic swimmer instead of someone who can fight criminals it's the wrong description and it's used in 99% of novels when talking about how amazingly fit someone is. Sorry for the rant but it bugs me every time I see it.
Lake? I think the last sentence needs am edit :p
Adds some realism though whether the author did or not. People forget things and makes the mc more human and not perfect.
Isn't that a significant portion of most history curriculums in most countries? Like 50-80% at least depending on which country you live in probably is stuff that isn't relevant unless you want a career in a field about history. I dont remember much of my history lessons but here in the UK there was a huge focus on the world wars so I know a few random facts about them and such. I personally prefer medieval history but wasnt a lot of focus on it other than early in the curriculum. I think making a printing press would be pretty simple in theory, would take a few tries to figure out the best way to do it but it would just be lining up stamps in some sort of metal or wood holder that let's you add and remove them, then just putting it in a press and there you go. Would probably take ages to make all the individual stamps for letters or words but yeah, it should work fine once you have tried several ways out and expect the first few to fail or not work 100% at first. As long as you know how an object works theoretically then you can usually figure out how to make one with trial and error. Knowing that they exist and work means you're not going through the trouble of something new just figuring out how to make something that already exists which removes a lot of the problems you might face.
Auto correct is both the best thing ever and also a major annoyance lol
Something about the last sentence doesn't quite make sense. Not sure what the correction would be though.
"wing wings" needs fixing:p
Probably better to do came "inside" than "came" inside ... second one sounds wrong