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Probably having the urge to re-read like I am now. Checking your own comments you remember posting. That or someone liked the comment and then it popped up in the notifications where they saw the mistake and came back to correct it. Could be either.
I know the feeling lol. Sometimes you love auto correct and sometimes you hate it :p
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Hey man, just checking in how you are health wise. Hope you're doing good and have plenty of bacon to eat!
I opened the comments expecting a shrek meme and this gif is exactly what I was looking for lol
Lucky you, the font doesn't even show up on my android tablet it only shows blank placeholder boxes.
Fair enough, that's up to you. Just wanted to let you know that keeping up with where the MC is on his travels is difficult and makes it harder to read is all. Still, keep up the great work, hoping to finish catching up to the latest chapter if I read fast enough today!
Hey author, is it possible for you to share the maps you have made for this AU? I can understand things like custom images for characters or Pokemon being patreon only because it's still fairly easy to imagine them based on descriptions and if you release 1 of those there's that hidden expectation that all of them will be released for free however it's a lot harder to understand the world when in this AU it's just so much bigger. Absolutely love the novel so far, been binge reading since yesterday, keep up the great work! :)
I guess personal preferences also depend on how tall you are. I have always been tall and am at 6'4" last I measured myself a few years ago. (Doubt I grew much if any since then though lol). So to me being taller than average would be preferable and honestly I would prefer to grow to my current height in such a scenario. Granted there were problems such as the horrible growing pains growing up and trouble with smaller spaces but I'm used to dealing with those now so it wouldn't be an issue in my eyes. I can see how being between 5'10" and 6 foot as your reincarnated height would be a good one. Slightly above average height but not so tall it's obvious you're a giant and less of the negatives of being tall.
Understandable, dealt with muscle atrophy myself. Hope you build yourself back up and your cough goes away soon. A tip to prevent you from hurting yourself, don't expect to be able to do all the same exercises you normally would without hurting yourself. Don't be afraid to go to simpler or easier versions until you begin to build yourself back up. An example being doing push ups against a wall instead of on the floor.
Speach or quotation marks (" ") are used to show speach or quotes. Apostrophes (' ') are used in many web novels to show the thoughts of the person that the point of view is written from. In this case if Marcus is thinking something it would be written as '(whatever Marcus is thinking about as if he were mentally talking to himself)' If you are only describing a scene or the actions of a character you do not need either apostrophes (' ') or speach marks (" "). In this case you are using apostrophes making people read it as if it was an internal thought that's not been spoken aloud when you shouldn't be using them as you are only describing a scene and the actions of a character.
I actually like the flashbacks as long as they help show character development of the MC. Like the one with Arctus Black that showed her playful side :p. I'd say keep the flashbacks to 25% of the story at most maybe? That way there's plenty of the present content. Hope you feel better soon!
Thanks for that! Makes a huge difference lol. I have gotten annoyed at many authors who have counted such things towards the word count and used them to drastically inflate the word count of their stories.
Thanks for this! Especially how the status doesn't count towards the rest of the chapters word count. It always annoyed me in some system novels where they say it's a 3000 word chapter and then 1000 words is for a stupidly long status makes up the last 3rd of a chapter. Great story so far, keep it up!
most if not all of us has experienced*