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dasimi510

dasimi510

Lv15

great lady

2018-10-09 JoinedMalaysia
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  • dasimi510
    dasimi5102yr
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    Use 'his' for male and 'her' for female.... please use good English for your novel

    Ch 260 Chapter 257 Stunning the audience
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    Mrs. Hawn, your disguise was penetrated
    Urban · NewEraCult
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  • dasimi510
    dasimi5102yr
    Commented

    the English still very poor...hope to see some improvement....some words still misused

    Ch 201 Chapter 198 is getting more and more confusing
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    Mrs. Hawn, your disguise was penetrated
    Urban · NewEraCult
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  • dasimi510
    dasimi5102yr
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    the storyline is very interesting...I really like the plot.....but the English Grammer and vocabulary are very poor.... hope to see improvement

    Ch 181 Chapter 178 Encountering an avalanche
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    Mrs. Hawn, your disguise was penetrated
    Urban · NewEraCult
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  • dasimi510
    dasimi5102yr
    Posted

    I love this novel. the plot is written beautifully. Written English is good too I do hope that I will not have to wait too long for future updates

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    Big Shot's Reincarnation Sweeps the World
    Urban · Nalan Cloud
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  • dasimi510
    dasimi5103yr
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    the story development is very interesting I'm quite happy with the translation, hope you can keep up with the quality of the development of the story line

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: The Eternal Heart
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    Loving A STRANGER
    Fantasy · AnnaShannel_Lin
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