The characters are well thought out, each with their own goals and flaws, making them relatable. Their interactions feel genuine and add an emotional layer to the narrative.

Keep up good work, good job, I wish I could find here few more chapters. First was cool and wanted me to dive into this novel :) I hope u will not give up!

Hey! I like it :) Keep up good work. What makes this book interesting is the effort put into building the world. I think I will look up ur novel after few weeks also!

What makes this book interesting is the effort put into building the world and developing a plot that keeps you guessing. There's a nice mix of political intrigue, ancient prophecies, and battle scenes that keeps the pace moving.

I'm fond of the concept where the main character has a conversational system by his side, making the journey more intriguing. The writing is easily digestible and perfectly descriptive. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter's arrival.

hey there! I like it! For me ur writing is good, I'm interested what will happen to mc! Keep up good work. I didn't see any grammar mistakes and ur plot is fun.

Hello, as the architect of this narrative, I've meticulously crafted each layer to transport you into the realm of my creativity. I hope it resonates with you. I'm eager to engage in a conversation about Marlene's odyssey. So, dive in, reach out, and let's embark on this journey together. Stay tuned for what's to come.

Sure, I will give a try. Give me two days to read it up.

Thank you!

Thank you!

Thank you!

I'm truly humbled by your generous words. It's high praise indeed, and I wish wholeheartedly that it could be true. This novel has indeed been a labor of love for me, requiring every ounce of courage and creativity I possess. I'm glad that my work resonates with you on such a deep level. Thank you for recognizing the effort and passion that went into this book. I hope you will follow Marlene story till the end.

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Your writing style is good but please work on your grammar, read it few times before publishing or play it on some kind of txt to voice, for me it was the best choice. Your vivid descriptions make visualizing the action and environment effortless. The pacing is spot-on, allowing the story to unfold naturally and engagingly. The characters are well-crafted and memorable, each with their own unique appeal.

Kudos to the author for crafting a world with such a solid foundation. While the characters may lean towards the conventional side, they are undoubtedly well-developed. The real strength of the story, however, lies in its smoothly unfolding plot. Indeed, the main character's journey, marked by misfortune, adds a compelling depth to the narrative. I thoroughly enjoyed the writing style and the well-balanced exposition at the start, which made the story easy to follow. The main character's journey is so intriguing that I find myself eagerly turning page after page. Keep up the great work, Author – you've certainly captured my interest and I'm excited to see where this story goes next!

hey! thank you! well I will think about making it at least 1500 words, I like this 800-1200 chaps because they r quick and it's easy for me to check them up. It wasn't hard to put it up coz I have many docs ready to be uploaded here but I'm removing mistakes and trying to change my oryginal storyline. THanks again for review!

Hey there, I like it! I will put it also for later, is a bit slow but I enjoyed it! I think u r working hard on the story. welcome to my library.

5 stars from me to make you sure u r doing good work, I liked it maybe it will not turn in a way all such stories goes... I mean I will keep reading and try to find something refreshing, for now the protagonist seems to be cool and I see u worked hard to bring this world up. Cheers.

Hey there, currently I'm on two platforms... and I made podcast... I wish have so much time for other things xD But I will look it up. cheers