It is a good book. Please don't look down on others work. If you can write a better story do so.. Then please don't trash someone's hard work.. To the author thank you for this wonderful book! Please keep up your good work and take care of your self in the hard times. Thank you for the glimpse into this world you have given us..

I like this book it has a good speed and flow the MC is a young man who is strong but has a weakness when it comes to his family but also strength not many grammar errors a well-thought-out story I want to see how it will progress it's not your typical sci-fi VR story they jump in and out of virtual reality and reality and in both the MC is overpowered but flawed there's a price he must pay for the power he is given but he willingly , except it time again overall it's a great story and I've read a lot of books and props off to the author

you have my condolences take all the Tim you need and and please know life will return to your world.

just because you are immortal does not mean you can't be killed just that you don't age and we'll you are a lot harder to kill

I like it so far, and it flows well. Brake the mold and make your world come to life.

please keep going I lost my mother this week and reading your book helps me it gives me a world to go and not think of the sadness your book is great and I would be pained if you stopped so please finish it out as you have planed I love this book and the wonderful world you have created the characters you have created have given me joy happiness sadness you bring them to life so please keep going😎

Thank you for the Chapter your works are amazing!

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I love this work of art please keep it up you are doing great!!! Thank you for this chapter...😎😎

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it's not the sword your throat but the knife to your back the hidden blade can kill you quicker than that which is brandished before you. thank you for your story!!

ok for the haters stop please. It is not your book the words flow into a story we are along for the ride enjoy if you don't like it don't read it. the author is writing the story as he or she sees fit just because a story is dark or light does not take away from the story. so please don't spread your hate!! to the author great work thank you so much for a fun and amazing story and POV's..[img=update]

I like the names lol

you are a stellar writer please keep up the good work you are greatly needed in the world of writing

I like it, more please!!!

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