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DaoShadow1yrCommentedCh 129 Lowering Their Pride- DaoShadow1yrPosted
Very good novel, imo even with the best potential among the novels from the author. Stable update like always, excellent grammar with very rare and minor errors. The Setting is also very unique imo, story will live or die depending on the dynamic of the 2 mc‘s and their character growth, which is very good at the moment. At the start u might dislike Anna‘s character but after chapter 85 or so she will start changing for the better. Definitely give it a try, it might become the authors best novel imo Newest chapter is 128 as of writing this review.
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She knew he … not she
Because of the blood oath tying them together, Amber immediately went on her knees. She had received a small amount of information on her master identity; she knew she was someone astounding, one of the strongest vampires existing. She felt honored to serve such a master. - DaoShadow1yrCommented
„…it’s to late“ is where the monologue ends
"I should get out of here before it's late. For extra safety, I decided to send an emergency signal through the phone." - DaoShadow2yrCommented
Agata called HIS name
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when HE heard her voice
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I won’t lie and tell you it’s the best story ever created, BUT this novel is definitely a hidden gem you should give a try. The characters have their own personality, goals, etc. World building and power system are also solid. Grammar is a cut above most novels here imo Improvement could be made in the conversations/interactions between characters, sometime they feel odd or dull imo. If you searching for something new to read, then give this novel a chance it wont disappoint. Chapters atm 80
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fear* ?
For the first time since the battle started, Nathan felt feat. - DaoShadow2yrCommented
Tia‘s*
Tina's eyes shot wide as they trembled. - DaoShadow2yrCommented
Tia‘s not Tina‘s
Just when he began to think if his decision was truly going to be correct, he found a soul transmission heading Tina's way. - DaoShadow2yrCommented
tbh i hope there will no redempton arc for his parents, cause they dont deserve it imo. They completely destroyed his life with their lies and manipulation for +-10 years, where he was hurt physically and mentally as well. And it was even in his childhood where he would need them the most.
Ch 529 Meeting - DaoShadow2yrCommented
At the end it should be „her“ not „him“
It was only after seeing the approximately five hundred blood spears falling from the sky and turning everything within a kilometer into a wasteland of death that Nangong Lingxin finally understood why even an arrogant, proud, beautiful, and terrifyingly powerful woman like Shangguan Bing Xue, was willing to listen to the young man in front of him. - DaoShadow2yrCommented
I missed you / not miss you
"I miss you," Soon, he hugs the two. - DaoShadow2yrCommented
Threw her, not him
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1 10 i ????
''Yeah. I wonder where she is? What are they doing to her? I swear if any harm were to happen to her, I would slaughter everyone one of them.'' 1 10 i - DaoShadow2yrCommented
„They couldnt LEAVE with a sleeping alex“ btw if u read this author even though i point out some mistakes here and there and never wrote even a review, i enjoy and like u story very much so keep up the good work 👌
Artemia and Isabella waited for Alex to wake up before going back; they couldn't live with a sleeping Alex. However, even after one day, Alex showed no sign of waking up. The girls decided to wait a little bit to see; maybe he was exhausted; unfortunately, even on the second day, Alex was still unconscious, even Silveria didn't show up. - DaoShadow2yrCommented
„inwardy nobody KNOWS what she might be thinking“
When he thought about the troubles that were about to follow when the other girls would learn about this, Alex felt a headache coming, especially Maria; she may appear to be on friendly terms with Artemia, that is on the outside, inwardly nobody what she might be thinking. Learning about what happened here might make her switch attitude toward Artemia; discord might occur in his newly created harem, something we wished never to occur. He just wishes for all his women to have a harmonious relationship, not necessarily for them to be best friends but at least to be understanding, accepting each other, to be forgiving enough to learn from each other, to be forgiving enough to leave together because they have the same man, love the same man. - DaoShadow2yrCommented
Lets here / should be „Lets stop here“ i guess?
''Let's here. How are you feeling?'' Alex stopped Artemia before she could further tease him; he knew she was acting tough; Alex could feel her heart pounding hard, proof that she was embarrassed. - DaoShadow2yrPosted
Ez 5 star review cause the other novel from the author is top quality content and this one seems like a very good one as well from the first chapters👌
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