The editor forgot to mention what was it that was increasing. Sometimes it feels like territory area, sometimes resources and sometimes the wolves.. .. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

I don't if it's the author or translator, but names are itself the Pandora boxes. They are just Absurd and some super Absurd and levelling for the boy is too easy and none of the team mates seem to care. He is just one punch man.

Nah it's just like Pokémon games we used to play in java cell phones ages ago.

Man, is it the same feeling one has after he reads the kingkiller series. Like I wish that Patrick had gone bald after 15 years of hiatus but still want him to publish his manuscript. [img=recommend]

Bro, I really want to crush you into mincemeat. The story was going so well and you just had to drop it. ... Also, the only major loop hole I found in your novel is this. You made it so that the whole earth is covered in dark fog or at least do gli continent is so. Then do you ever thought of what would happen when sun has not [img=faceslap]shone on an area for close to hundreds of years. It will be all frozen. Take poles for example.

This one here had a great outlook and starting theme. Man, I thought I found something to spend my time on but ..... Everything just blasted into a mess. The villains I.e. Fallen Angels can literally do anything and everything. They can summon any and every race of the universe when, author repeatedly emphasises that they are just one 9f the many successful races. They have control over a space nuke and I don't think it cost them a lot because they use it more frequently than a successful person goes on the vacation. The Mc the gets power ups and everything he needs just in time and money does not matter. He could get it from any of the four or five types of shops introduced till now. Like we have all conquering general shop then class shop, quest shops, Castle shops, auction houses, Kingdom shops and many more to be introduced. Then the gods are just a bunch of useless spectators who are also similarly all knowing. Author states that the modern chips have stopped working but I don't know why helicopters are still working along with its all systems intact. And then again Angels are and just referees but to me they seem to be amnipotent... And girls are just high on hormones....

Bruh

Though there are some national viewpoints later but it is very much damped down and you won't regret reading it. I can say I have read most urban cultivation novels and this one most readable. That name thing is just at the beginning and some of the few points. Later its not really targeted at any country and he does have many foreign friends and interactions. Don't know about the webnovel translation but the previous one was good and I had read upto more than 800 chaps at that time.

The world building is seriously a mess. At the start of the story it was said that there were zones restricted according to cultivation level when broken by higher level cultivator will bring heaven punishment. Later the hero as a qi practitioner meets foundation establishment in the beginner village. And guess the cultivator of all realms can pass through the area. No restriction at that moment. Later the story is all about the mc going to beast den, killing all the beast without any repercussion, interference at the last moment i boss fight. Winning and returning to the base city. Making new pills, that too in hundreds. Eating a few cultivation and then breakthrough. New gift pack and Holla. Repeat and repeat and repeat..

Lnmtl rocks and teaches even Novi es

It's certainly weird.

Mr Writer, I liked your previous story and loved The one from angels and demon's. But this disappointed me. Not going to nag you about it but really. He used magic in front of camera in a world where there is no magic. Or if there is magic in this world then firefighters would not have needed hydrants.

Nothing to show later.

It's not worth it.

Nope nothing. No climax . More like isekai with emotionless and a human with no androgen in his body.

Bro he is not writing this but translating the book most probably from qidian. He started from energy voting pool.

Man, you should definitely not take on this of you want to read something readable. Grammar aside just the ranking system has me irritated. The MC broke through from rank 4 to 5 and some 20 chaps later he again break through to rank 5 and then next chapter again but this they say it is for body. So he broke through to rank 5 as a mage twice. Then later he break through rank 6, upgrades his spells and plans for[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] breaking into rank 7 and at chap 208, he again break through to rank 6. Like what the heck. He can utilise laws. Very good. But why does it seem that he has unlimited energy. Like for example to break through from Rank 6 to Rank 7 which later became Rank 6,one needs 200,000 spiritual energy or mana. Then goes saying that a Tier two law consumes few thousands of energy so we will take not very high no. Just 1000. So he takes 5 Laws as a base for his spells usually so a spell takes him 5000 energy to use and he uses them as if they are infinite. An expression from the book. He condensed so many elemental swords that the sky was filled with it. So lets see. The total amount of mana maximum 200,000 divided by weakest posiible spell, 5000 is equal to 40. Thus our Mc fills up the entire sky with just 40 swords where to be noted he is also using a flight spell and various other protective spells for himself which he said consumes a lot of energy as compared to other spells. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Bro he broke through from rank 6 and reached rank six . Just like what happened with ran 5 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Bro chap turned from crystal to scale

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon