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Good job.I like this version of Wolverine better. It seems he has all his memories? And doesn't feel the need to compete with teenagers?
Worst actual name ever.
Doesn't the Darkhold corrupt the users mind and soul? Isn't Alex especially vulnerable to mental manipulation?
Endless Path: Infinite CosmosA fanfic/original story that starts in Danmachi. Over 2000 chapters now.
Too Long. Didn't Read.
That name is awful and sounds like a weeb came up with it.
FULL OF FEMININE FAT!!!
Can't he teleport? Didn't he teleport earlier?
Adrienne Frost is definitely a better choice. That way, you can still use Emma Frost in the OG story. Also, the version of Frost in that movie was kind of terrible.
Despite it's negative connotation, chocolate is actually a good descriptor. Depending on how it's mixed, chocolate can literally be dozens of different shades of brown, from dark ebony, all the way to a tan, almost creamy color.
"...he didn't know what changes having an extra core will bring him." Delete the first "will" between "changes" and "having".
Why does every Harem MC have to have a foot-long shlong?
After a whole night of condensing, WHAT WAS PREVIOUSLY ONLY A POMMEL, NOW HAD ABOUT..."
But that changes everything!
More Formal? Black yoga pants and a gray hoodie? Does she even know what "formal" means?