the main character does fit with Slytherin, the ambition and self-preservation, not a perfect fit maybe but the best one, for the houses at least

when I got to chapter 38 or so, I found the giving an explanation on chakra and how it keeps flowing conservation of energy, I don't really like the explanation, since it changes a large part of the power system of Naruto and to an amount goes agast some stuff that he has written before, but that's the point of fanfiction changing stuff from the base source, within some limits and this is nowhere near the point where to becomes either a copy of the orange or a new novel. oh, and if me reading until chapter38 or so doesn't tell I really do like the novel so please don't stop, :)

you know there is one thing that always annoys me with fanfictions about Naruto that has science as a big part of it, they don't think about whether the laws of science are right in Naruto in the first place, sure most of the laws with a bit of tweaking should be fine, but say conservation of energy, doesn't even if you ignore ido Tensei which is by lore internet, then super kage like Madara and Hashirama still beak it, for example, it is shown in the show that while ninjas eat a lot they don't eat a house-sized amount or anything like that, so Hashirama eating a good amount but still humanist amount would not get enough energy to make a forest, not a small one either but one the size of a city, and then they is six=paths level characters that though plants level of energy yet still eat the same naruto when he was a Genin, assuming they eat it all (Hagoromo Otsutsuki, soul form), sorry but that was annoying me a lot in fanfiction, still a good fanftionc though so keep it up should I delet this?, it seems like too much complaining.

honestly, I don't see many people talking about how cool the art and animation are, which is a shame because it is cool

true, oh and don't forget about what the gods will do to his afterlife, a grimdark world there is no 'good' afterlife, only torture and suffering.

no, it doesn't, even without sages of 6-paths level of power, only super kage, or even kage, both break conservation of energy, the super kage, after maybe 10 people's worth of food (normal food), can crush mountains, and Kage with about the same amount of food can brun Forrest down or if you get the 5 kage, they can grab a meteorite that was the size of a mountain and stop it from falling on the earth, that breaks conservation so much it's funny if someone thinks about it, still better then dragon ball z though with the infinite ki generator

The healing skill should heal him no matter what state it is in, If I read it right the reversal ability affects both his skills and his body, not one or the other, so when he casts his healing reversal on himself, causing damage he ability should convert to hailing again, some for his buff, when he casts at himself with the ability on it becomes a debuff, then when it affects him the ability reversals it again into a buff

Even in the the show, those two were not weak, I remember at the first fight between Honma and Buki, Honma was on top of a skyscraper during an earthquake and decided that nope, earthquake be gone, and slammed his foot down stopping the earthquake without breaking the skyscraper, that is at least mid-level

it most likely is, there is a light novel for everything nowadays

Hahaha, nope it was intentional, items that define logic.

really?, this just dropped my opinion of the main character but so far it's been a decent novel so good work.

sorry, some of it didn't write, at the end, it was meant to be "you rarely see that."

I got worried for a second that you didn't do something like looks up how many seconds are in a day, but I am glad you did, minor/to medium details like that show how much care an author has for their work, and this shows you have a decent amount and you are just good at writing too :), I really like the long time for the golden finger to become useful, you really see,

I remember watching a video a long time ago (so I could be wrong) but in the video, it bought up a desinsu? (the books that have information about characters like they rough level of power and other stuff) or something like that saying Kakashi's chakra = the 3 Hokage, but the implanted Sharingan just drained a stupid amount covered or not, so Naruto's chakra is 10 times that of a Kage

I think making so the main character asks who he has to kill first first would fit better with his goal, of course that’s assuming that he only killed people that by his definition was evil, (other then his time in the military)

good attention to detail there, some whould have forgotten about god’s ban on his name/title

Or he could write the all his memory’s down, read it, and burn the book, his identically memory will mean he remembers what he write down with a very low safety risk

Can you please put spoiler in the title

Black Grade? Is yellow grade colour grade?

I liked it until roughly chapter 54, now harem’s aren’t bad if done right, but have foreplay with girls while in a relationship, without the knowledge of said partner is cheating hell even just going on date’s is cheating