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BBWulf23dCommentedNice! Love the cute Gobbos, and looking forward to seeing more mamonos. Honestly, the only gripe I have is with the unnecessary pov changes. Most seem like filler, or just a side story that is only sometimes related to the actual story.
Next chapter we will have the first Harem character and the character's departure from the Yss sisters' house.- BBWulf24dCommented
😭 Living my childhood dream
I have played nothing but Pokemon since I got my White Rabbit, I have caught over 99% of the 1000+ Pokemon and beaten every single gym, elite four and champion across every region. - BBWulf24dCommented
😱
He got up and walked in front of the full-body mirror standing in the corner of the room. Lo and behold, a pale baby-faced teenage visage stared back at him instead of his usual tanned and sharp one. He was also shorter and skinnier than ever...the horror. All his gains were gone...all of it. - BBWulf1mthCommented
Is author gay? So much time spent glazing the MC.
H-He's even hotter than any famous male idols and actors she knew! I-It's not even comparable!!! - BBWulf1mthCommented
Author so great, that they forgot what they wrote literally a few paragraphs ago. Did he not want to be the one giving it to them? Did he already forget? … Honestly, probably not even worth thinking about it, brain rot is clearly prevalent in this, so anything intelligent is unlikely to be seen
"...Aika, are you a genius?" - BBWulf1mthCommented
… 300 points per roll, with most common being worth 500? Gamblers heaven
Everything available in the shop can be obtained in the [Gacha]. Meaning, they could be obtained for much less. Most [Common] ranked items cost around 500 GCP while [Uncommon] ranked items cost around 1000 GCP on average. However, anything above [Uncommon] was much more expensive. It was a chance for them to obtain much more expensive items for much less. - BBWulf1mthCommented
Mostly just maybe be a bit more descriptive. I suggest, if you’re looking for examples, to check on ao3 instead of here. The quality of most smutt on here is terrible, and shouldn’t be used as an example to learn from, unless it’s learning what NOT to do.
"A/N: Okay so just listen to me I know this is my first time writing a smut scene so please tell me if I made any mistakes and if you have any advice for me then please tell me I am desperate." - BBWulf1mthCommented
Mind control is for those too inept in seduction, and lacking in basic social skills.
Function: 2 times more denser Qi, 2 times stronger body, 2 times more Comprehension, The user gains Primordial Yang Physique in Foundation Establishment realm, Mind Control of any female in the same realm. - BBWulf1mthReplied to Shadow5789
No
Function: 2 times more denser Qi, 2 times stronger body, 2 times more Comprehension, The user gains Primordial Yang Physique in Foundation Establishment realm, Mind Control of any female in the same realm. - BBWulf1mthCommented
Dang. Would’ve suggested the first one, if it was going to get upgraded immediately.
[DING! Lucky event activated the rank is again increased by 1] - BBWulf1mthCommented
Let’s Gooooooo!
Chapter 51 - BBWulf1mthReplied to insatiableinsanity
Believe me, first thing I do upon opening this, is shut off half of my brain. Still doesn’t seem to work
Rem, pausing, gave Lai Qing a chilling glare. "Remember, you're expendable. Don't overstep and anger me." - BBWulf2mthCommented
Dang. But did you know, in terms of…
10) No Pokemon Harem - BBWulf2mthReplied to Benjamin_Rodier
This didn’t age well
"Come on, you don't have to be like that," Vorden said as he placed his hand on her shoulder. - BBWulf2mthCommented
Then what tf was that interaction in the first chapter? He made it seem as if not having a power or level was the reason for the bullying, when it seems that that’s the norm?
Quinn lifted up his hand to look at the watch, which indicated his current power level was one. When he looked around, he noticed that everyone else's watches currently showed the same number. - BBWulf2mthReplied to Viadhivan_Ranata
Fair enough. Just thought punching things would work for MC better with some brass/spiked knuckles. Knives work too though
..... I think I should buy a sword or a dagger latter. - BBWulf2mthCommented
A different format? No script? ❤️😊
("If only Kasumi have learned Haze, then she can reset the stat reduction caused by Rattata's Tail Whip.") - BBWulf2mthReplied to Viadhivan_Ranata
Honestly? Because it makes an otherwise pleasing read, not. It looks ugly, and is disruptive to the flow of what we’re reading. Like an annoying speed bump, on sn otherwise relaxing and pleasant drive.
Kotonoha: *still closing her eyes shut while she is hearing the sound of the sleeping bag zipper being opened* ("Huh? Jovanna-chan, what are you trying to do....?") - BBWulf2mthCommented
Just get some brass knuckles, or some other punching weapon
..... I think I should buy a sword or a dagger latter.