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rap_monster9 months ago
Replied to Mague_Sanchez
It's not being honest if you're speaking of subjective things! 🤯 Dropping stories is weak, at least there should be a proper ending!
I Am A Boss Mommy That Wants To Slack
General · Mr. Yan
rap_monster2 years ago
Replied to luciferswifey
I mostly forgot the story now, but this world (maybe) has abundant magic so why not just make convenient magic clothes? XD
Watching him come down from his horse, Gideon told her to turn her head away from the king so she did.
The Crown's Entrapment
Fantasy · Eustoma_Reyna
rap_monster2 years ago
Commented
Your Fae addiction is mingling with your mind 😂
"What does she want?" he asked, swallowing another grape.
The Alpha's Temptation
Fantasy · MishaK
rap_monster2 years ago
Commented
Childish 👤
"You know my answer, Father," he said. "Why go through all this all over again? I will not marry. And that is final!"
The Alpha's Temptation
Fantasy · MishaK
rap_monster2 years ago
Commented
Rest assured, Alpha. No one has a single clue~
Unhappy, Eltanin paced his bedroom. How could she simply leave without him knowing? How did she escape the room so softly that no one had seen her? He wanted to give Fafnir a good dose of his anger, but that would mean that the King of Draka was crazy for a girl. Which, he supposed, he was, but didn't want to reveal, or admit.
The Alpha's Temptation
Fantasy · MishaK
rap_monster2 years ago
Commented
Lowkey hillarious 😂
After a moment of silence, Fafnir coughed lightly and asked, "Find who?" Only Fafnir could dare ask this of King Eltanin without the fear of decapitation and his head being hung upon a wall.
The Alpha's Temptation
Fantasy · MishaK
rap_monster2 years ago
Commented
Truly capable 🖤
Fafnir frowned, checking the looks on his soldiers. All of them returned a blank, unknowing stare. "No," he replied, shivering inside.
The Alpha's Temptation
Fantasy · MishaK
rap_monster2 years ago
Commented
Why? It is understandable that in these people would be prejudiced but isn't restricting them to some limited professions a less productive idea? Maybe the King is just incapable.
Most of her kind shifted for the first time when they turned eighteen, but some had shifted earlier, too. In the monastery, the priests could figure out who would shift early and who would not. They assigned the jobs to the people accordingly. Those who never shifted, or who had lost their wolves, were enslaved. They worked in the kitchens, did the laundry, cleaned the latrines, and scrubbed the floors.
The Alpha's Temptation
Fantasy · MishaK
rap_monster2 years ago
Commented
I am sure this is a good enough story but please, PLEASE, use paragraph breaks. They are simple to understand and not using them at right time makes reading feel like a chore.
The few sconces that lit the corridor had dimmed, producing only a dull light that lined the hall. She waited for a sound, anything, to caution her, but heard nothing — only the rhythmic drumbeat of her panicked breath. She glanced left and right, and when she saw that was alone, she scurried down the walkway. At its end, she found a deep stairwell leading down. A sense of foreboding hit her, and goosebumps rippled across her flesh. She felt like returning to the bedroom but didn't. How could she take such a chance with someone she did not know? What if the guards caught her? What if the King caught her? She was a spy, after all, from the monastery — a place that was considered sacred amongst all the kingdoms. The place where the werewolf kings came to offer their prayers and sacrifices. If the King came to know that Menkar had sent her, the monastery's name would be in shambles. However, a thought rattled her. What if Menkar denied who she was?
The Alpha's Temptation
Fantasy · MishaK
rap_monster2 years ago
Commented
pried herself free* but even then the word is not right.
"Calman's horns!" she breathed. Tania shook her head to get out of her stupor. She had to unravel herself as soon as possible, without inviting too much unnecessary attention. With every kernel of energy within her, she lifted his arm. Pinned beneath such a heavy man, she wriggled as much as she could, but wriggling out seemed like a massive effort. A caged little bird underneath a big bad wolf. After a few attempts, she prized herself free, letting his body fall to the bedsheets. The man groaned as he stirred; Tania froze as fear ensnared her. If he woke up now, he would hand her to the King and she would end up dead. So much for the freedom she had sought.
The Alpha's Temptation
Fantasy · MishaK