noBiggie

Some books when reading makes me feel as if I was transported to a different world. This book makes me rush to shower to clean off stink where it dropped me off. Uselessly complicated? Nope. Amoeba style single brain cell overworking to write a plot. Author is just stupid.

I have read enough “no need to lie”. Dumb and repetitive.

Plot seems rushed and stupid. Story happens so because author pushes so.

What is this stupid and rushed plot line?

Like an NPC, he always stays there.

This is fatiguing to read. Rework author

You could just say problem with 6+.

Defeat them? Writing for pg13 author?

Translation “let me be your sugar mommy”