I didn't know about later chapters, but edit your first few chapters. it's a cliche per para. every sentence calculated to max efficiency to forward the cliche. somehow MC is behaving dumber than his intellect or age.
save for what? your first born?
wtf, why is this sh.t rated 4+? I never called anything sh.t. but this is one, and explaining why I did so would be describing sh.t and deducting why this is worse that real life sh.t as it may be used as biofuel. Author gathered some curated cliches. then did a speed run with it. so it's now a gushing diarrhea.