Good read😌

Seriously dude, are u in Nigeria?

lol. soundgod😏

Hold up. hold up. your an Nigerian?

really really like this aldus character. reminds me of old characters from movies and series that are calm, complicated and violent when necessary or emotional

he just needs to bring his mum and be a good son

chapters!!!!!!

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Y do i feel d chapters are getting shorter?🤔

Hahaha. your definitely my brother, dear author. buh am resuming jan 3rd. still writing my exams tho. weird i don't like reading buh reading novels calms me🤔

Fuck it all

dope sauce. some doctor strange shit.

🤣🤣🤣 the last lines killed me🤣🤣🤣 this are what friends are for🤣

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4. Like the pace of the story buh wish there was more chapters. like 1 chapter per day for a whole week 5. A bit more character development, more fight scene and smut scene. we need to know why a character be fighting and smaching 6. Think the story is lacking chapters. it's strength is basically MC response to everything, like he has basic human sense, like his see something suspicious, he acts on it or keeps it in mind. especially like the scene where he taps the mirror to alert (forgotten her name buh know she's time witch). Let their be a sense of logic. makes the story more believable

1. I like the story in general 2. Think my fav is the MC and his responses to certain situations 3. Don't think i dislike anybody, maybe if 1 of the characters pull I won't mention what's wrong and try to fix themselves, then causing the problem to be bigger. hate that shit😤

Yo. more chapters 🤤

think she should wait. too many enemies, she become more of a target like kia

really like this chapter. like the how it brings hope and something real about character.

Keep up the good work.👍🏾👍🏾