I'm starting to wonder, well that's a bit of a lie. I do however hope this novel is not dropped and merely on a long hiatus. I keep checking every now and then and now it has been seven months. If it is dropped then I want to say its's a shame but it has been a good read for what it's worth

I just read all chapters, and reading this again brings me more joy than the first. Everything makes more sense, I see the connection and I know I will enjoy this novel even more. I hope for more chapters to come. I will also say, this is one of the better novels I read, I truly hope the lack of comments hasn't dissuaded you. I for one love every bit

Some tip. I won't admonish you for the fact of using you and then I, however you is usually used as a narrative form by someone telling a story to someone, or about someone. For an example an RPG. If you wish to use you form and I, then I guess you can mix em. I for the main character and maybe you on the animals like the wolves. Like you feel their hatred as they gnarl. I don't know just a poor example. Besides that, good read and I .an not wait for more^^

I think that is the point. I quite like how it was told, and fairly curious to see what will happen next.

Yuri definitely no male love interest, also fine with harem though or outright polygamy

What a way to drop someone in. I almost feel bad for him hahaha

I'm gonna give good marks for this, and will give a second review once more chapter's comes out. Sorry this will be a wall, on my phone so I apologize for not being able to space it out. anyway I love the prologue, and I hope when they find out they can't log out you won't do SAO style. It would be nice to see how things goes early on, seeing how smooth the prologue is. Story wise very nice. slight shame she went half human, wish she didnt', but that's personal opinion and not a critic. Overall great flow, lifelike main character, she is not stiff, nor one dimemnsional so far, hard to say early. I do hope you won't burn yourself out for seemingly pushing a few chapters a day. No need to rush yourself, unless you lessen the load once the prologue is done, not that I would know what is going on in your head. The background is good so far, it is clear she can draw from her former game, giving her an advantage, one advantage many have. Overall can't wait to see how it all unfolds

catched up for a second time wohoo ans I hope it goes well with the removal. Gotta say, so far this read has been very nice, though I think it might be time to maybe introduce some new people, someone who could genuinely be her friends, as well as a female lover/potential female lead seeing this is Yuri after all.Would be fine if it won't happen yet though, but I do feel she deserves someone who could keep up with her, it would do Alexia a lot of good. No this ain't a complaint, trust me I am enjoying the read by quite a nice margin, I wish you the best of luck.

spoiler alertI honestly feel really bad for her, and her family. She is however correct in her assumption, sadly though time flows differently. I do wish that she didn't actually physically age once the dungeon run is over

the male form better be unavailable, like he doesn't even act like a guy, and it is meant to be Yuri no? so I feel it will ruin it quite a bit of the story

it ain't claim. claim has a whole different meaning, the word you want is calm. you should look it up

Anytime, and I will keep reading your story, I am enjoying it so far, and I don't find it wrong for it to be similar to the novels I have read. Since it matches my taste if you can call it that, and I hope you keep up the good work. so far so good

I wonder if I should type my review on PC instead... seems like whenever I write on my phone all the spacing I make disappears becomes one giant wall of text, apologies for that

so far It has been a really good read, I haven't noticed much on the grammar department so I can't say anything on that. The story itself feels lifelike, in the sense you get sucked into it. If I have a complaint, then it must be due to the abrupt time-skip. I found it to be way to early, it would have been better to wait a bit.After all due to the mood change of the main character, and us not being able to see the development between her and Elaine the mother figure. it's a bit of a downer. The same applies to her application of her element, and chosen weapon.What I did not catch since I was so absorbed in the story, along with visualizing everything is how it was written. So I apologize author, I can't comment on wether you focus on show or tell. Instead I hope you will follow the saying show don't tell. Besides all this, it was a very nice read. I do hope you give the female lead a string instrument, this could be her auxiliary weapon for long range or mid range attacks. Her talent was vibration right? if so a string instrument would compliment her equally much as a gauntlet does.At least those are my thoughts, and it can Also work incredibly well with her sin of lust as she can charm her foes through the music. Another idea if she gets a second element then maybe give her something that correlates to her sin, or illusions. Reason for illusion is that it gives her utility and can work well with her sin. Gosh this got very long. You are doing an amazing job in my book, so I really hope you don't look down on yourself by saying it is your first work. Keep doing what you are doing, and sometimes it is better to focus on the flow of the story then having everything perfect.

gotta say, I wanted to scream... I want moooooar

okay author, your story feels similar to two novels I read. Anyway that ain't my point, I do enjoy it so far, but I am thoroughly irked at the same time.I get that you might not or ain't a native, so I beg of you. Please correct your wording, like it is not Premordial it is Primordial, I hope you fix it.PS: I am not a native speaker either so I won't cuss you out for it, but do keep an eye out. Go back and forth to check if you phrased or worded something wrong