goldenchild725
I love reading books, particularly the ancient type books with female leads, alchemy and so much more
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I did. The author just asked me to help edit. That's all.
Came and gone? It doesn't sound right... shouldn't it be came and went?
Comma after soil.
Full stop after Kathleen. Get rid of didn't. Comma after everything.
Question mark after first.
"But dear, Lucy... she can't..."
Lower case n for night. Comma after April, and lower case h for her.
You need to rewrite this sentence. It doesn't sound right.
Comma after speaking.
Full stop after follow, and get rid of so. Finally rather than then.
Full stop after all rather than a comma.
Comma after further.
Comma after father.
"for the both of them." Comma after straight.
Of rather than from. Semi-colon rather than comma after shrine.