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Ghostlywiz

Ghostlywiz

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2018-09-30 JoinedGlobal
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Replied to Ghostlywiz

    my mistake it's not the length it's the pacing of the story maybe that's got my concern

    Ch 143 Chapter 41 - Don't mess with the father (part 2)
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    Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
    Fantasy · Sound_Hammer
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    did the author split this chapter in half? if I'm not misunderstanding this chapter consisted of the teachers briefly talking and then the door being smashed, then an introduction. I think the author may be getting a little burned out writing at such quality and releasing twice a day. I'd recommend slowing down release, and writing a bit more, I mean this novel is really good but the chapters are premium, it's a little much, Thank you anyway, love the novel

    Ch 143 Chapter 41 - Don't mess with the father (part 2)
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    Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
    Fantasy · Sound_Hammer
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    honestly saw no problems with anything, this was just a really fun read. thanks author.

    Ch 32 Group of Weirdos
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    Ant King In MHA
    Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    pyscho -masn

    Ch 33 Mei's Stalker.
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    Negative -Girls: To Live And Die
    Horror · Little_Foxxy
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    love the story, thanks author, keep trying just a bit longer in this loop of negatives

    Ch 26 Off With Her Arm!
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    Negative -Girls: To Live And Die
    Horror · Little_Foxxy
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    I'm not crazy you are, just because I hear the word more repeating doesn't mean I like this..baka

    Ch 23 Diana
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    It Seems Like I Got Transmigrated Into An Eroge
    Fantasy · Xeoz
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    I'm convinced that these chapters are hypnotizing me, I read and read but it feels like it's never enough, it's almost too satisfying

    Ch 21 Cardinal Luke
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    It Seems Like I Got Transmigrated Into An Eroge
    Fantasy · Xeoz
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    yeah you show that final fantasy character, on another note, thanks for the chapters, suddenly finding there was no more was truly heartbreaking

    Ch 19 Intermission(Lily)
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    It Seems Like I Got Transmigrated Into An Eroge
    Fantasy · Xeoz
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    sounds good, a binge a week, keeps the gods meek

    Ch 216 A change in schedule
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    To walk the mist
    Eastern · Mfonemana Uduak
    detail
  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    ah yes, deary, do you mind getting in the oven to clean it, it will certainly help your martial arts

    Ch 206 Vol 2: The Widow (4)
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    To walk the mist
    Eastern · Mfonemana Uduak
    detail
  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    so you've really pushed us off this cliff hanger, neat

    Ch 328 Wizard Kick
    altalt
    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    one right after the other, much appreciation for the chapters, but don't push yourself too hard, it seems like you've been through a lot, take it a little easy but don't forget about us

    Ch 204 Vol 2: The Widow (2)
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    To walk the mist
    Eastern · Mfonemana Uduak
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    were still here, we took a seat on the cliff with a nice view of the mist. I apologize for your loss, I hope things start to go better for you.

    Ch 203 Volume 2: The widow (1)
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    To walk the mist
    Eastern · Mfonemana Uduak
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    I could definitely feel a change in the dialogue as it felt more fluent slightly, though I'm a bit biased since I enjoyed your dialogue since the start so I can't say much in form of criticism.

    Ch 326 Final Final Cliffhanger, an apology
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    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    i would say the story got less complex with everything coming together, in a good way. Some the ngs in a story, in my opinion, should be left mysterious and unknown, such as demon magic, we don't need to know how it works, only what the result of it is, that way you don't get caught up in needless details to satisfy a few curious people. it also allows for a more open ended advancement in case you wanted to pull out say a trump card without it seemingly to come out of there butt. I'd say you pacing is good but excruciating. I guess just keep up the good work

    Ch 321 Targets
    altalt
    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    always good stuff to be found here, this chapter felt pleasantly long, thanks for the chapter love you ;-)

    Ch 202 The highway (8)
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    To walk the mist
    Eastern · Mfonemana Uduak
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    the chapter lengths have certainly picked up, yet the cliff hangers still leaves us all addicted for more, thanks for read

    Ch 429 Enlistment
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    I Have A Super USB Drive
    Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    good chapters lately, your on a roll starting from around chapter 1 to now, keep up the streak

    Ch 412 Death
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    I Have A Super USB Drive
    Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    it almost feels like the chapter was purposefully cut in half, it' makes for good suspense but it's just to short, my man's arrived, got possessed, went to the computer and... cliff hanger

    Ch 411 Close Contact
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    I Have A Super USB Drive
    Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear
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  • Ghostlywiz
    Ghostlywiz2yr
    Commented

    no revisions but still quality, thanks for the chapter, just whish they could be longer

    Ch 308 Heretic
    altalt
    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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