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Kronos33317dPostedI have read the whole novel on raws, it is a very good read. no young master drama and rapeyyyy stuff but this novel was abruptly ended by the author.
detailImmortality Martial Arts: I Started with the Five Animals Health FistEastern · It's really not Xu Xian- Kronos3332yrReplied to Felix_Flanders
Authors make this type of ridiculous or unbelievable backstories because today's normal people with normal backstory are so domesticated and basically without excitement for life that if a author uses this type of person, he either has to make the mc go through a tragedy or an unbelievable situation to make the character interesting. As you can see that extraordinary circumstances create an extraordinary person. Nobody wants to watch a lame mc. will you read about an mc who is basically a job slave and too coward to do anything in life even if given a second chance?
Hello, there. My name is Oki Takemikazuchi. I was just a normal loner guy and always had been. There was never a person for me, my parents? Well, they just abandoned me and not in an orphanage but at a dumpster... that aside I did had some bright things in my life. The sun which was always there to wake me up was one, my beautiful boss and well, she was bright and whenever I see her, I would be a man with uncontrollable hormones running amock in my body... well yeah, nothing was bright like vitality in my life. You could say my electricity bill is quite low as well as I rarely use lights or any other appliances, I hate my job. - Kronos3332yrCommentedCh 74 Chapter 90: information, and new mission.
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Mizukage?? it should be kazekage!!!
This paragraph has been deleted. - Kronos3333yrCommentedCh 574 West Conference Finals 4
- Kronos3333yrCommentedCh 201 Breaking her in(R-18)
- Kronos3333yrCommentedCh 60 Chapter 74: Annoying woman.
- Kronos3333yrCommentedCh 224 The first day of actual training
- Kronos3333yrCommentedCh 81 [Apprentice!]
- Kronos3333yrCommentedCh 195 NOTICE: WITHHOLDING FOR FINALS
- Kronos3333yrCommentedCh 191 Biggest Challenge Yet
- Kronos3333yrReplied to BlueGrimmoire
I am really grateful that you took your time to give your honest opinion and such nice suggestions. I just wanted to try a hand at writing this , I am not going pro with this or anything and for this novel to be in the novel section. I really didn't know how to put it under fanfic , it was just the create option and no other choice was in it(or I could not find it) but I will try to take your advice and start from scratch with a fanfic and improve my writing skills. So thanks
- Kronos3333yrCommentedCh 183 Feelings Bloom