SerHawke
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SerHawke7mthCommentedCh 10 E2138-10: Shining Armor- SerHawke1yrCommented
trekked not tracked
I tracked through the forest along the familiar hiker's path and found my new old home standing quietly and idyllically. From the outside, it was just a decently big wooden house, unassuming, contrary to the interior. However, this wasn't my target. - SerHawke1yrCommented
clearing not clearance
"Of course." She bowed while I stood up and left for the Royal Backyard. The door at the end of the hallway was like many doors in this tomb: a portal. When I exited it, I found myself in a clearance inside the forest. - SerHawke1yrCommented
marveling not marbling
However, internally I was relishing the comfortableness this furniture could offer, but I dismissed these thoughts since I wouldn't be able to stop marbling at the luxuriousness of this place. - SerHawke1yrReplied to WhatIfMoble
- SerHawke1yrCommentedCh 12 March 9022
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Starts out fine but then takes a turn. Rose gets disowned by her family which I do not think would ever happen. As much as the family are purebloods Molly Weasley would never give up her children. She literally killed Bellatrix for almost hurting Ginny. Super forced and against the characters natural personalities.