Banana_Bomb

love the little cat shenanigans, always refreshing especially when the target is his dear mom lol

its just getting better, Brootherhood, Ji You and Peng Lai, its really lovely to read something came true, like what if the umbrella corporation goes head to head with cyberpunk Militech kind of thing.

I love how the author messes with fury head, its funny. someone as serious as Nick Fury finding out that what Natahsa said is the truth and its verbatim no less is just funny.

good gosh, this novel brings soo much nostalgia.

too much out of whack on power trip. the idea is decent making potential changes to the future plots, but it becomes out of whack on power scaling and forced justification. " I'll kill kushina so minato can commit genocide" is just a no no (this doesn't happen but a good enough example)

welp it was not half bad, but its just getting beyond ridiculous at this point. pain is gone adopted and being a good guy, forced plot to kill the wife so MC is justified to go on a rampage and commit genocide. It becomes more and more forced. If you plan on writing something else, tone down the power trip and forced justification, one chapter wife dead next a genocide happens because of it. its becoming too much out of whack on a power trip.

its getting blander and blander with the ridiculous power he has. you will write yourself into a corner sooner rather than later.

just wish the amnesia nonsense with Aika to be over soon. It's kind of redundant and pointless doing it so far into the plot, its just a curse of writing, and most readers will hate it, if it was done earlier that would be easier to swallow.

you have time to read an entire chapter yet not this? can you tell me why? It sounds pretentious ain't it? do it yourself, you're not a kid.

yeah aint happening bud, not with the groundwork slowly setting in stronger by the day.