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nathbregou274mthCommentedCh 390 Wealth and Resource Planning- nathbregou276mthReplied to Kvothe_the_wind
Yeah it was it mentioned earlier, I believe it was when he pulled the golden finger
However, after the special simulation, he had lost the newbie benefits of free simulation and could only have one free simulation every ten days from now on. - nathbregou276mthCommentedCh 116 Chapter 116: Even Closer Relationships_1detailUnlocking The Easy Mode Of Cultivation After Getting MarriedEastern · Faint Fragrance Of Red Beans
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"I can fix her !!!"
Even if they were enemies, he could still turn them good and see it as helping them to reform.detailUnlocking The Easy Mode Of Cultivation After Getting MarriedEastern · Faint Fragrance Of Red Beans - nathbregou276mthReplied to roderick12345
just replace "could" by "couldn't", and it makes sense
However, despite being in debt, Dante could truly claim to be poor. After all, he had grown up in an upper-middle-class family with two loving parents and a nuclear as well as extended family that were largely supportive and capable. - nathbregou277mthCommentedCh 1270 Day 1270
- nathbregou277mthReplied to Unholy_Dragon_God
Don't worry, I know it's hard to spot the mistakes that you make. Again, sorry if I came out a bit angry in my first comment, I like the idea of your novel and didn't want to see it ruined by bad grammar. And it's getting better in the newer chapters too.
Ch 9 Is She Dumb? - nathbregou277mthReplied to Unholy_Dragon_God
oh, I didn't see that, I read "eye technique" as one object. Maybe you should put a comma in between the 2 parts, like "hands and fists have no eye, techniques didn't work", because I thought the 2 parts were one.
That left him with one final question. Does he kill her during this exam? With the excessive scrutiny his actions were placed through, the old hands and fists have no eyes technique wouldn't work. Or would it be better to kill her some other time when there was less scrutiny of his actions? But how would he keep her from spilling the information before that? - nathbregou277mthReplied to Unholy_Dragon_God
I wrote some paragraph comments highlighting some of the mistakes. They're less common in the latest chapters, but they can put you off a bit during the reading. I don't know how grammarly doesn't flag those errors, considering some are simply grammar errors. I still like the story, it's just that I was quite early in my reading and these passages were annoying.
Ch 9 Is She Dumb? - nathbregou277mthCommented
each second that passed bucket like an eternity
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the old hands and fists have no eyes technique wouldn't work
That left him with one final question. Does he kill her during this exam? With the excessive scrutiny his actions were placed through, the old hands and fists have no eyes technique wouldn't work. Or would it be better to kill her some other time when there was less scrutiny of his actions? But how would he keep her from spilling the information before that? - nathbregou277mthCommented
God that scared me
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520 is chinese slang for I love you, as its pronunciation is similar
The game was priced at 52 yuan, giving it a romantic touch. - nathbregou278mthCommentedHowever, before entering the game, she would frown from time to time. Why did everyone suddenly bring this up again? She felt that something was wrong, but she did not know what it was.