"You won't go wrong listening to me. The reason why I was able to survive and become a patrol captain is because I know what business we should and should not interfere in!" the patrol captain said firmly.
I think you should add some zeroes in that number...
"He's killed before, and it's not just one or two people either. I would guess he has at least ten kills." A young man in the carriage said, "Of course, ten might be a little much."
After seeing Concubine Shang's stunt, Liu Shishi was both shocked and angry. Thankfully, Lin Xiaofei stopped the other before her hand could make contact with her face, or else, Liu Shishi would have to tackle Concubine Shang tp the ground and pull her hair out!